Quadropy - Comments

please update,very nice story!!<3

Please Please update!!!!

Pretty please update soon

More please

O.o. Wow. Definitely not what I expected!
I absolutely love it!
And so much feedback with only 2 chapters. That's definitely a good story!
Hope to read more in the near future!
<3

More please

Please update

please update this as soon as possible, it rocks! I read the original version and i loved it. read the sequel, loved it. read this. guess whats next. I praised it!

I love this story. More please :D

Maybe this is just me, but I felt like the foreshadowing the pictures was a little heavy. I remember that the original had a much greater air of mystery, but maybe that's because I now know the basic concept of the story. :)

First off, I like the banner.

I don't read much Bill fic/tokio hotel...I dont know why I love Tokio Hotel, I'm weird.

Anyway, wow! This is really good. I can honesty say I'm hook. The way you describe the details is very good. Like other said I want to know why Ramona left the hospital and why Bill's wife is dead.

I can't wait to read more and Im definitely subscribing :)

I'm definitely getting a bit lost in thought with this. Because I didn't even know who Bill Kaulitz is until I googled him (because this does have the feel of a fanfiction, so I had to check my suspicions), and then I didn't know what Tokio Hotel is until I googled that. So behind on the times. -.- But because of that, I'm worried that there might be something I'm missing in the story, some detail or reference that a fan would understand.

At the same time, though, it's written really well. I'm definitely hooked, even while worrying if there's something I'm missing. You leave a lot of references to the story line, without answering quite a few questions you created, so that's an excellent way to get readers interested! I want to know what Ramona was in the hospital for (love the name, by the way. Just something about 'Ramona'...), I want to know what the deal is with Bill and his dead wife and the sadistic caretaker. I mean, that part... I'm dying to know what the heck is going on. XD

So excellent job! I'm hooked. Worried, but hooked. Do you know if a non-fan will still be able to get a lot out of the story? If so, I'm definitely subscribing. :D

I really love the banner. :') it's so simple, yet so important to the story. At least I feel like it will be. <3

Anyway, absolutely adored this. I'm definitely subscribing - just throwing that out there before I forget. You've got a tantalizing way of writing and this is just wonderful. I was kind of apathetic about it through Ramona's section, I'm not going to lie. But when it got the part about Bill, holy crap, I was on the edge of my seat. You left me hanging with so much with his part. Bill's section is why I'm going to be a regular reader / commenter. I just need to know the answers to my kajillion questions you gave me! I'm quite excited for a longer chapter that will hopefully fill my need of knowledge. <33 This story really is wonderful so far.

very pretty, simple layout - quite charming :)
and i also quite love the name itself; its unique and actually what drew me to it overall
i got a pretty good idea of what she was like just in the first paragraph
kind of a skinny, pretty, a bit awkward, nervous kind of girl
the chipping the nails and tugging at the sweater is things i do too haha
i like that her boyfriend was there to support her :) - and i like the name keaton
i can already tell that they're a cute couple; support is a lovely thing to have with one <3.
i'm curious to as what she's recovering from... and I hope I can find that out soon
okay it was rehab; but i'm curious as to what - drugs, alcohol? something else completely?
wait; this person's wife killed him then herself? wow; crazy person.
oh ramona killed him - this makes sense, is this correct?
and the second part she seemed so crazy and demented; it was a bit frightening
but overall? I really liked this :) you're writing style is lovely and you manage to get good, little details in there often
the story line is very unique and cool as well - i loved it :)

This layout seems quite cheery compared to the first chapter I had just read o.0

You do have a great detailed way of writing. It flows smoothly. Despite this being a fanfiction, you have chosen to do a unique and original plot, which is an amazing one, I must say :)

I did notice an error. You said "Bill's Kaulitz's" I believe you meant "Bill Kaulitz's".

But that's about it, overall good job :D

I love the new version already. And I think Billy, Mikey, or something that ends with "Y" is a really good name for a childish version of Bill.

It think that this is going to be really excellent.

Loved it the first time and I will love again!!!!!

Can't wait for the revamp!

i'd read the rewrite