this. is. so. ADDICITIVE. PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE hurry with the next chapter; its amazing. I've read the whole story (so far of the story) tonight and i'm DYING for more!!!!
Okay. You now have ME insane. The obvious guess would be that Alice has MPD... Just because of the fact that she seems to be controlling all of this... And that's naturally what I would like to think... But then, it doesn't make sense? So what if Ramona has MPD and all of this stuff with Bill is just a series of interactions between alters in an internal world... But that's a little too psychological... (Or psychoillogical, if you will...) So that doesn't make sense... So maybe I just shouldn't say anything... Because you've created a monster that is going to consume our minds because we're all thinking too hard... I hope you are happy. :P Keep it up!
SWEET BABY JESUS :D I have a strange feeling the person is going to be Alice. I'm sad because it's coming to an end but the idea of sequel got me all happy again. :3 This story keeps me on the edge and I love it. Yes, four weird unrelated sentences. But I had the feeling to write them all out. :)
Gawwwd i freaking love this story!!!! always leaves me wanting more! seriously, this could be published! i cant wait to see what happens next!!! eeep! so excited!!!!
I've actually been keeping up with this story since you posted chapter 1 way back when lol. About time I leave a comment, huh? Just wanted to say it's very interesting, well done, what everyone else is saying lol Oh yeah, and I've got a little theory as to what "Quadropy" means. "Quad" as in 4 and "ropy" possibly from "entropy" which in modern times means "chaos, disorganization, or randomness" (which really suits it if that is the case behind the title because of the main character's multiple personalities) and it's original Geek meaning being "change, turn". Actually, to be more specific, that was the Greek meaning of the "tropy" in "entropy" which comes from the Greek word "trepein". Anywho, that's just my theory lol. When the story's over, do you think you could tell us all what it means, like maybe in your last author's note or something? It would be a wonderful lesson in English and a fine example of wordplay for all of us inspiring authors, like myself, could learn from. :)
I came across this story on Quizilla and then I found it on here. So I was just wondering do you have a Quizilla account? If so what is it? Because I think that the person posting this story on Quizilla isn't you and is stealing your idea. But I could be wrong that maybe you so could you just clear this up for me please?
Alice is just a scheming, murderous, controlling, old wench! Ugh! Of course its her setting people on fire all willy nilly. Now Poor Janelle has to suffer.... I really do love this story and not because my name is Jeannell (different spelling).