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  • whenpigsflyxhaha

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    WHOA so not fair! you can't just cut a story off like that!

    "what do you think is wrong with Mr. Kaulitz??" I don't knowww hurry and update :DD
    August 19th, 2010 at 07:20am
  • EllaCarden

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    i think he has MPD a multiply personalty disorder would explain the behaviors.
    August 19th, 2010 at 03:28am
  • TopazStar

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    love the story =) can't wait to find out what's wrong with Bill
    August 19th, 2010 at 02:58am
  • Pineapplez

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    I don't know what's wrong with Mr. Kaulitz... Maybe an anxiety disorder? That sounds so lame...
    August 19th, 2010 at 02:32am
  • identity crisis.

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    This is a wonderful piece of writing (^з^)-☆ i really look forward to the development of the story and characters.
    August 16th, 2010 at 03:21am
  • FinalThunder

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    I never commented this?
    Oh well, um I really like this story.
    I'm not gonna say it's soo different,
    because people have already said that like 1 million times already.
    Anyways, I love your style of writing. You leave the reader interested.
    It's always good from start to finish, which keeps people wanting more.
    You're on your way to writing stardom ;)
    August 14th, 2010 at 10:41pm
  • Pineapplez

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    I noticed a typo

    "Tom watched as Mr. Kaulitz gave a strained handshake to each of..."

    I'm guessing that you write the other version first. XD Have you revealed Bill's greatest fear yet? I like the way that you're presenting Bill's character...It's very mysterious.

    Wait. I thought vegans didn't eat eggs...Are they eating fake eggs? What is a fake egg even made out of? O.o
    August 14th, 2010 at 02:45am
  • Pineapplez

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    Please update again soon. I like this story a lot because it's so different.
    August 7th, 2010 at 04:01am
  • NEIN

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    Whooa !!!
    August 7th, 2010 at 02:29am
  • Pineapplez

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    Like it.
    August 5th, 2010 at 02:55pm
  • whenpigsflyxhaha

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    This is so different then anything i've ever read! i like i a whole lot! i can't wait for another update : )
    August 5th, 2010 at 01:28am
  • NEIN

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    I like this vary different :)
    August 5th, 2010 at 01:17am
  • Opus 28

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    I have no idea who this guy is, but I like the story. I want to find out what's going on, and why he needs a caretaker. Nice hook :) Keep it going.
    August 3rd, 2010 at 03:51am
  • TheWorldIsUgly

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    Why are the caretakers going to hell?):
    Sad.
    Anywho.
    I liked it! I was saddened by the fact it was a funeral.
    But when he snapped at the escort it made me smile :3)
    August 3rd, 2010 at 02:19am
  • SNOOKI WAS HERE.

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    Okay - first thing is first, and that is that I really dislike Bill&&Tokio Hotel, for some reason. .__.

    Title
    :D I'M A SUCKER FOR WEIRD TITLES! -noms Quadropy up-

    Layout
    Eh, it was pretty cool, but I don't like it when the story area isn't the same size as the picture. It makes it look off balance, for some reason.

    Description
    :D I like it, again. Short, but funny. I giggled.

    Chapter one
    And, this is where my car just hits a brick wall. There's something about the way you write, and... It just doesn't appeal to me. =/ I feel bad for saying that, because you are a pretty good writer - I can see that, but to me it doesn't pull me in.
    I found one mistake - “To hell with caretakers!” he though to himself. It should be thought, and the quotation marks are only used for when someone is talking.
    August 3rd, 2010 at 01:34am
  • Unneeded intricacy

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    This seems pretty interesting, I'm intrigued.

    So, yeah, I like it, pretty good so far (:
    August 3rd, 2010 at 01:29am
  • Pineapplez

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    Wait. Maybe all of

    Answer this trick question; What is Quadropy?

    is part of the acrostic. You've seriously brain-ninjaed me. I thought it was a little weird that you justed a semi-colon instead of a colon.

    I think this story is going to have a lot of do with phobias, but I still don't see how that would tie in to an acrostic, since there aren't a lot of phobias that start with Q. Maybe something that has to do with schizophrenia.

    Maybe this all has something to do with how there are four (Quad-) sites that has stuff to do with Quadropy on them. [Quizilla, deviantART, Tokio Hotel Fiction, and Mibba]

    I need to stop worrying for this now because I doubt I'll be able to figure it out. I don't even want the prize. I just like puzzles. XD
    August 2nd, 2010 at 08:48pm
  • Pineapplez

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    Um. I've noticed that there is also a story on Tokio Hotel Fiction that is also named Quadropy that is twincest. Is this one also?

    Could the entire question "What is Quadropy?" be part of an acrostic?
    August 2nd, 2010 at 08:30pm
  • Pineapplez

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    Hm. I think it's an acrostic for something. Googling it doesn't help except for hints found at http://quizilla.teennick.com/user/123MissMurder456/journal/

    Quad- Deals with four
    Dropy- Deals with personalities or emotions

    There is then an acrostic of phobias in which the first letters spell out INSANE. It may be pointing out what an acrostic is or it may be a hint to the meaning of Quadropy.

    I'm also wondering about why Quadropy is capitalized. The author may be signifying that Quadropy is a noun, since all nouns are capitalized in German, but I doubt that. I think it's most likely that in the acrostic, the Q is the only part capitalized.

    The author also says that this is a trick question, but I think that is referring to the use of the acrostic.
    August 2nd, 2010 at 08:24pm
  • xgrimmjowx6

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    Awesome!!!:D Hope you update soon!^_^
    August 2nd, 2010 at 03:13am