I think that your decision to not write the sex scene was very good because not reading about it somehow made it seem a little bit more special. I am so glad that Matt can remember things. The kids are so cute!! Can I keep them?
i totally agree with the comment above me! i cant believe your only 14! you make the rest of us look like jackasses lol nah i love your writing and your story. great job! more soon?
Dude! I can not get over the fact that you're such An amazing writer.. But ur 14. You're so mAture For your age...not tht there's anything wrong w being 14. You just write like an adult! Please update soon:)
You were definitely right. This one was filled with cute moments. I couldn't even pick out my favourite one because the whole damn thing was friggin' brilliant. :) I'm so glad Matt remembered something! That kind of brought tears to my eyes, especially when he told Bryn that he remembered and then he explained what had happened. I was so happy for the both of them that I did get a few tears going there. ;) Matt making breakfast and dancing was a priceless picture for me. I could imagine that perfectly, and I friggin' burst out laughing like a mad man because of it. Plus, Matt with his kids were pretty adorable! I loved it when Vlad got pissed off and stormed away, but then came back later and wanted to lay down with them. Awwwiee. xD Update soon! :D <3 <3 P.S. I FRIGGIN' LOVE THIS STORY!
I love you so much right now for updating twice in one night!!!! It makes me soooo happy, oh and definitely makes up for the no sex scene No need to worry about that can't wait for more <3 Michele
found this story just a little while ago and I love it. Really well written too. Oh and don't worry about the sex writting thing, I'm 19, almost 20 and I hate writing those scenes, I make my friend write them for me >.< anywho, can't wait for another update.
Was that the end? lol I was reading this and wondering, what ever happened to Val, he was "In love with her" and she just kinda disappeared......just wondering