Married To The Mafia...? - Comments

  • storyluver1143

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    sooo cute =] keep on writing more!
    September 6th, 2010 at 01:44am
  • purplebull

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    im literally speechless, i do NOT know what to say this was WAAAAAAAAAAY to goood!! i lovee ethan!!! i can NOT wait to see what happens next!!!!! my favorite chapterr so far!!!
    update sooon!

    -thank you&come again.
    September 6th, 2010 at 01:30am
  • neon.band.aids.

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    I love this story! I've been with you since the second chapter of the first story!! I can't go away!! And its cool, I kinda get lazy an neglect my stories sometimes too :)
    September 5th, 2010 at 07:44pm
  • Erinnnn.xo

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    awe, i love how ethan's so protective of her
    September 5th, 2010 at 04:53pm
  • brunooo

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    I love it I love it I love it! About the part Ethan said 'my wife' I mean. :)
    How I love your story. Nice and fresh plot, detailed description, developing characters.
    I'll definitely wait your next chapter. Please update as soon as you can.
    September 5th, 2010 at 04:39pm
  • ikickshins

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    Okay;
    I guess she wasn't imagining things. d:
    Update soon?
    September 5th, 2010 at 04:29pm
  • CalamitiesandDreams

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    Oh and the last chp (3) was just awsome! Had me on the edge of my seat! :D
    September 2nd, 2010 at 09:20am
  • CalamitiesandDreams

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    Da Da dA Da DUH Im Lovin' it! I love how their relationship is still growing in the sequel, unlike most stories where the two main characters fall in love in the first few chapters, and the drama is still their at the same time. Brilliant, cant wait for the rest!!!!
    September 2nd, 2010 at 09:18am
  • Shallowbeauty

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    Absolutely fantastic!!! Once again, not letting me down one bit =)

    Can't wait for what's to come!
    September 2nd, 2010 at 03:46am
  • xxoomwauhzxxoo

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    ughh shes frustrating me!! i hope now she realizes she needs to run!
    its not being a wimp to run its called survival instincts. she cant even be safe in her own hotel!
    she really needs to let go of that pride. they should check the tapes to see if it was mason
    August 28th, 2010 at 10:15pm
  • TheGoodLlama

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    This story is so amazing (: I love it.
    August 25th, 2010 at 06:05am
  • icomein_peace

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    This is sooooo exciting! :) & I extremely wish that at some point in this one that Amelia &ethan fall in love :)maybe after more cliffhangers and what not but I extremely wish they do :D
    August 24th, 2010 at 10:52pm
  • storyluver1143

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    dun dun dunnn! that was dramatic! keep on writing more! =] cant wait!
    August 19th, 2010 at 06:53am
  • maligallo

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    plz...!! faster updatess!!
    August 19th, 2010 at 05:01am
  • Oh!

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    LOVE, LOVE this story. Can't wait for more.
    August 19th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • talking_girl95

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    that was soooo sweet
    i'm going awwww already
    August 18th, 2010 at 05:59pm
  • ikickshins

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    I think he might make her go to a therapist...
    Or just see if it was Mason...
    August 18th, 2010 at 04:00pm
  • OhhJodie

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    i loved it :D
    cant wait for more :)
    August 18th, 2010 at 01:45pm
  • purplebull

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    so happy you updated! my internet is being extra stupid & im tired i was jus bout done go to sleep.

    anywho vegas is beautiful like really its exactly how you see in those pictures all over its so fucking beautiful<3
    though the mornings are just like any other place not that great but nights are beautiful!

    & who knew that a scarp psycho brother is gonna be the one to bring them togother?!
    i hope there will be more kisses

    but kinda depressing really everytime they almost kiss something tragic happens & evertime hey DO kiss its bcus something is gonna happen or happened BUT if a price of a kiss is death then o dont mind LOL especially if its between ethan & amelia!

    this couple really make my heart tingle...
    & awww chapter next??!

    post it soon(:

    & as always fantastic chapter:D
    you amazing you should know.

    -thank you&come again.
    August 18th, 2010 at 10:02am
  • JustShrugAtlas

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    BRAVA! BRAVA! i'm in love with this story as much as i was with the prequel! God Ethan is irresistable! Update quickly!
    August 13th, 2010 at 07:31am