Married To The Mafia...? - Comments

awww! thatd be so cute if mason wasn't after her! keep on writing more! =]

Loved loved loved this!

I totally love their relationship!

&can't wait to see what happens with the mason buisness!!

Anywho would write something more loving but its 5:13 in the morning & I'm on my pphone so its hard to do anythingXD

As alwayss this was a master piece(:

(To make your life easier.. "I listed to Ethans..." it should be I lisented. I would go back & count which aragraph it was but I'm on my phone, its hard lol
I couldn't care less about grammar & spelling really but some crazy freaks who get pissed if they see the slightest mistake, are out there. plus I know how HORRIBLE the task of going over chapters is, you never find mistakes since you can pratically recite the chapter!)

Amazing chapter(:

Update sooon!

Goodnight(:

-thank you&come again.

Such an awesome story!!

I really really loved this update!

Awh, Amelia and Ethan are so incredibly cute together. <3

I love how mature your characters are. I would have been insanely disappointed if they hated each other then fell head over heels in love like all of the other arranged marriage stories. I like how Amelia and Ethan act together, the small moments of affection between the two are really subtle but I love it when you add them in.

Update soon! This is my favorite story on mibba right now :D

i feel so bad for her
and ethan is sooo sweet

YES!! fantasic! cant wait for the rest!

awww! i hope they can have a happy marriage after they deal with mason! keep on wriitng =]

I finished reading the prequel and thought it was amazing! I can't wait for this, I'm so excited :D

wow!!
great job!!
i cant wait for the next update!!
mason just needs to die!!!!!!!
XD

I loved the prequel and now I can't wait for the sequel!! =)

so unlike the prequel i'm gunna not be a silent reader tehehe yup...... so
i'm so excited.....dododo...and i just cant hide it..dododod...something something..... yup
i know what a great singer i am
okay so i love your story, like seriously i was a bit iffy at first cause i was assuming but at the same time hoping that you story wouldnt be like all the other arranged marriage stories on here where thety heate each other and then like get an epiphany and fall hopelessly in love. the characters are way more mature and the fact that you're slowly developing their relationship and their feelings for one another and at a good pace too is wow.

so um yeah.....i like you....not actually i mean like in ways of your story writing....cause um yeah....kay so im thinking i should leave before i end up blowing up something which will probably happen in about 3....2....1......oh crap.....

kay bye!

I LOVED it!!! I'm soooo excited for more! :)

Ooh, it's wasted no time in getting me as hooked as the last.
Of course, your writing is still amazing, and the was you describe things is perfect, along with the detail.
I'm already wondering what's set to happen.
I can't wait.

I'm actually really nervous for this story. I found the other one when it was already at least 25 chapters in so I had a good grip on things. With this one I'm going to have to wait chapter by chapter through to the end which (if you do updates once a week and this one is as long as the last) will take nearly a year of my life. Odd isn't it? So I hope in this next year (more or less)- Mason causes trouble, Amelia learns to live/love mafia life, Ethan gets to play White Night, lots of tense moments happen, maybe a few cliffhangers leave me frustruated, and maybe, must maybe somewhere in there two people fall in love. Heres to a new story- it's gonna be awesome.

I'm dying to see how this story unfolds,
how there relationship develops, maybe hate maybe love. maybe a baby maybe they'll split up and maybe the get kill, i don't know and don't tell me i wanna read it!! i hoping for a least a little bit of love at least a couple of weeks that they love each other but is up to you I love the story anyway 'cause i'm sure do will do it just fine

OMG yeiii a sequel love it !!!! updateee

Holy crap! I've been waiting for this for a long time!
cc:
I'm excited.
<3

now that i read everything & wrote that long ass comment time to truly comment here lol

this already seems better then ever.
i see here there is interaction & such between Amelia & Ethan & that sent me to cloud nine LITERALLY

& their relationship is maturing rather then the i hate you leave me alone the had in the beginning i like how he truly cares about her but he doesnt love-love her

i really wanna see more them like crazy im going insane over here making scenarios in my headXD

Drama from first chapter!!! mason is back & i can tell you wat i think is gonna happen but im not bcus you always do something no one expects so my guess is probably wrong

& i wanna see what they do with the business both the casinos & gang business!

& doesnt ethan have an older brother?? older then james & ethan... will he play i role?? i jus remembered him lol

Great first chapter im so happy their is a squeal & im SO excited too :D

-thank you&come again.