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  • naturally; jordan.

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    awee, you used my songss! hahaa, yayy.
    um, i seriously cried reading the chapter in jimmy's point of view, foREVer <3
    August 29th, 2010 at 02:16am
  • originalsyner

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    read the whole story in like 2 days
    i LOVE it
    August 29th, 2010 at 01:07am
  • BelovedSyn

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    ....You only have four pages of comments? Thats wrong! I've actually cried while I read this because it's so moving! It's like it's all so surreal and I absolutley love it! I can't wait for the next update :D. Keep it going, it's amazing :D
    August 28th, 2010 at 09:34pm
  • Brand_New_Eyes

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    That chapter was great! I kept saying "Aww" as I was reading. :)
    August 28th, 2010 at 07:09am
  • naturally; jordan.

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    i absolutley love this storyy, your such a good writer, even when you say you dont feel like it was good.. trust me, it was.

    and i think you should add When it Rains by Paramore to the playlist (:

    Gates, is sexy as hell!
    August 27th, 2010 at 11:46pm
  • therealdeal

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    I have cried, no lie, I have cried in most of the chapters.

    This has got to be the best, well written, absolutely genius story I have ever read in my whole life. Don't stop writing okay?!!!

    Hahah okay so I'm going a bit crazy but seriously, this is great.

    Can't wait for more!
    August 27th, 2010 at 06:36pm
  • Liz Mayhem :D

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    I just found this story and let me say I absolutely freaking love it. I love how it changes point of view, the plot line, everything. Keep writing and updating, Cause I just subscribed. (:
    August 27th, 2010 at 10:06am
  • Jennifer Mandeville

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    Hello everyone, thank you for all the comments, especially the new ones :)

    I'm just letting you know that I started school today and I won't be updating as quickly as I have been. I'm going to get the next chapter up either tonight or tomorrow afternoon. I hope you all stick around. Only a few more to go ;D

    Thanks again!
    Much love<3
    xoxo
    August 27th, 2010 at 04:16am
  • mcrgcvampress

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    Hey Sugar.. Ok so now I'm all caught up :D Wow... I can feel the emotion.. and I felt like I was there inside the story. Some parts made me cry, some harder than others.. Love 'em all.
    August 26th, 2010 at 10:01pm
  • L.O.V.E.

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    I love this Story so much that i cried on all most every chapter i love it so much it has so much soul and love pain and longing i just love it its how true relationships are i just love it you are and amazing author you should get an award for this its just mind blowing... i love it cant wait until the next chapter.
    August 26th, 2010 at 08:47am
  • PinkBug

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    Aw Michelle Yay Jen and brian!
    August 26th, 2010 at 01:16am
  • Haner's Harlot.

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    Wow, that was phenomenal! I actually really loved it although for some huge reason I am not a fan of Michelle. :P
    I was not expecting her to be so nice to Jen after how she acted with her before, but I was glad she did. Jen really needed for someone to put it into perspective that she did in fact have friends and family here for her to help her get better. :) I was friggin' so happy with the girls because now they're friends and Jen has her engagement ring back! Yay! Bravo. :)
    Update soon! :D <3
    August 25th, 2010 at 09:45pm
  • allzac

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    ahh this book makes me cry too much... im such a sap.. but.. im still going to cry
    :'(
    August 25th, 2010 at 02:47pm
  • KristapherJae.

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    This story. Is freaking. AMAZING. :)
    August 25th, 2010 at 10:02am
  • Haner's Harlot.

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    WHYYYYY? Why in the world would you do that? AHH! Do you want to make me cry? :( God, now i"m so friggin' sad and I just want to vomit all over because I'm crying my damn eyes out and my celeb crush just got imaginary shot! I think I'm going insane. xD
    But no! He cannot die! I'm pretty sure Jen's sick or she's pregnant, and either way he cannot leave her like that! I will not let him! Jimmy won't let him!
    Damn, this was too friggin' sad. Stupid gunman! Kill that asshole! >.>
    Update soon before I start to cry again! :O <3
    August 25th, 2010 at 08:10am
  • Insane.

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    all i have to say is
    oh
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    uhm,
    update SOON!!!
    omg im freaking out!!!
    loved it
    August 25th, 2010 at 07:47am
  • Haner's Harlot.

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    Damnit! Why do you insist on making me cry woman! :P I hate crying! lol.
    Jen is making me mad, although I can really sympathize with her. I feel bad that she keeps having dreams about Jimmy because it is horrendous how she found him, but what she does to Brian isn't helping her either. It's just frustrating and sad for the both of them, but she doesn't realize it. :/
    It's just a big jumble of sadness, and I wished so badly that Brian would have just rushed after her. Screw the thinking, just go for it! :O
    Now I'm all sad and torn. I don't know what to feel now. :(
    Update soon please. :D <3
    August 24th, 2010 at 09:49am
  • Haner's Harlot.

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    Oh my god, no. This was so sad, I started to cry. I hardly ever cry at anything! :( Now I'm just sitting here all sad.
    That was an absolutely tragic chapter, and although I was crying the whole time, I loved how you wrote it. Jen's disbelief was my disbelief. I still don't believe it. :(
    Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. <3
    Please do update again. There were no words for how much I loved that last one. So many emotions going through my mind right now. Gah...<3
    August 24th, 2010 at 07:17am
  • Jennifer Mandeville

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    200 READERS AND 60 SUBSCRIBERS! Thank you soooo much to everyone! This has honestly made me so much more happier than I have been <3
    August 24th, 2010 at 06:52am
  • Haner's Harlot.

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    *hits head against desk repeatedly while crying* NOOO! Fuck you Brian, fuck you! You're a goddamn jackass! Oh my god, I am furious right now. I need to breathe and remember that this is a story. xD But seriously, he did this fantastic speech about not leaving her, and what does he do? He leaves her? Goddamn asshat! ARGGH! God, I'm so angry. lol.
    I'm taking this time to hug the shit out of imaginary Jen. She needs some loving. Is she pregnant? lmao. I know, too soon, but a girl can hope. xD
    Update soon please! :D <3 <3
    August 24th, 2010 at 01:12am