Almost Lost It All - Comments

God. Hi Jen. You are well I want to say this word but I don't know how to spell it, so never mind. But this story is so perfect. It makes me so happy. I love you.

Ok Sugar.. I just read the update :D I kinda just woke up too.. Love it. "Good morning, clumsy" Epic!! Hehe

I don't know why, but the name of this chapter scared me at first. Thank god nothing bad happened, or I would have cried. xD lol.
Finally, Jen is happier then she has been in a while. That makes me super happy, because I always feel so damn bad when she's around Brian and miserable. I laughed when she stepped on the crab and fell back, then awwed when Bri caught her. Damn, this is suchhhh a good story. :) It makes me happy! :P
His fingers are slightly crooked from stretching across a fret for the many years he's been playing guitar and they're rough from the pressing down on the strings. They're a focus of strength. I don't know why, but I friggin' adored these lines. Absolutely beautiful, in my eyes.
Loved it. Please update soon! :D <3

*insanely giddy, happy laugh* My god woman! You have mad skills! I bow down to you yet again. This was one of the most gorgeous short chapters I have ever read. The imagery and description that you give is always so detailed, and the moment between Jen and Brian was very passionate. I loved it. You should have seen me smiling the entire time. :)
It was gorgeous. I was not expecting that from them, but I'm really glad they did. It was killing me there for a while, all the tension because they loved each other so much but didn't know how to express it. :P
Now I'm just wondering what Jen and Brian will do after this. I hope things won't be awkward, because I love them so much and I'm not sure if I can deal with that. They already almost lost it all already, and if it happens again I'm jumping off a cliff! xD
Thanks for the shout out too. But you deserve every nice comment that you get. You're a wonderful writer.
Update soon puhlease. ;) <3 <3

Aww sugar.. Anytime :D You're an awesome friend!!

I love how you write and capture the feelings within the writing. It's... WOW!

Wow! I love the motorcycle and the motorcycle scene :D

Amazing!

Double post to the best story in the world? Right friggin' on! My night has completely been made right now, you have no idea. :D
Jen was the voice of reason for the guys, and I'm kind of glad now that she stopped them. But, I was gleefully glad that Brian got that extra punch in. Fuck Ethan, he's disgusting. *shudders*
You scared the crap out of me with Jen's chapter though! I seriously thought she was going to kill herself or something. Only one problem with getting out of the tub was that she never threw the paper into the garbage. Hopefully Zacky doesn't get a hold of them. o.O
Wow, was not expecting her to run into Brian at all. But I'm glad she did. I think I was as surprised as she was when he offered her a ride. They're so cute together and I just want them to be together so friggin' bad! xD
My hands on his strong shoulders are shaking with such a passion to touch him everywhere else that I'm sure he can feel my fingers twitch. My legs are tense where I'm strattling his back. I want to cry with frustration, or fear, that we're this close again. < Just absolutely beautiful writing. I'm jealous. ;)
Pretty please update this soon! I'm greedy and love the shit out of this story! ;) <3

Jen Marie Mandeville. I love you so fucking much. You are the most talented person I have ever met. You are so skillful with your words, and I know you could honestly beat Ethan's ass if you wanted to. I love you. -Mikelle.

Haha he gets what he deserves. Finally XD... Love it.

It was rather difficult, but I managed to pick a favourite this time! *triumphant dance*
My favourite part had to be when Jen stood up for herself. At the beginning I felt such pity and sadness towards her because she couldn't even look at Brian when she introduced Ethan, and then she was getting tossed around. I loved it when she finally stood up to him, although that came along with consequences.
I cannot believe that jerk tried to rape her! WHAT THE FRIGGIN' HELL? Urgh, that just makes me want to punch something really, really hard. Jen shouldn't stop them from killing that dickhead! She should want that on him. He's sick!
I also loved how the guys were all screaming at Ethan and beating him up. I just admire how protective they still are over her. When she screamed and screamed, I was praying that someone would find her before she did get raped, and I loved it that she was traumatized to the point where she couldn't see who was who. It gave it that much more emphasis and believabiltity. I almost cried when she mentioned how she could imagine what Jimmy would say. Okay, done rambling now. ;) See, you're too damn good! ;)
Please update as soon as you can, I adore this story to bits. :) <3

I like the story, but you called Jimmy a guitar player in chapter 3. -.-" just thought I'd put it out there

Dude! Love the twist! I was like O.o WTF XD

Well girl, you've done it again. I've tried each and every time since I found this story to pick my favourite part out and tell you. But I just can't do it. Your words are so hauntingly beautiful that when I find myself happy with one line, another one quickly sweeps into its place. Bravo on that one. :)
Ethan, I have to admit, makes me so friggin' angry! Then again, I was already peeved at Brian for being jealous of Zacky, who's being a true friend to Jen, and it didn't help when that jerk showed up! Why did Jen let him take her? Is it because she doesn't think Brian cares for her anymore? Gah, it's tearing my heart up into teensy pieces. :( I'm so scared for Jen!
Please update soon! :D <3

This is such a beautifully written story. I'm very disappointed that it doesn't have many comments. What is wrong with people?
Anywho, you are wonderful. I'm subscribing and will comment every update. :)

Breathtaking! I love to stand in the rain, and be out in storms. This chapter made me think back to my childhood. Thank you. BTW love the new layout, much easier on my eyes XD

aww Brian sounds like a love sick puppy XD Love it.

Ey-oh hello everyone! I've changed the layout so it's a lot easier to read and a bit more pretty. I hope you all like it :D

Chapter 18 up tonight, hooray(:

Thanks, readers.

Aww thankies. I loved the update. I'm glad I could help you out :D I can tell you're cooking up something amazing. I can't wait to read it :D

hey.. ok so i get the feeling you are making Michelle out to be the jealous type. maybe you could have her act out on Jen.. idk ..

I HAVE JUST REACHED 100 READERS ON THIS STORY. Thank you to everyone who has been reading, and the new ones who are reading at this moment that made my night!

It may not seem big because a lot of better people have a lot more than 100 but it's a great feeling for me!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!
xoxo

More soon!