Almost Lost It All - Comments

:[ that flash back makes me wish jimmy wasnt dead. i love how you write him, and it just makes me sick to my stomach to know that hes gone. when they talked about him at the concert i went to, i couldnt even sing so far away from crying so much. im so into this story and cant believe my stupid email made me so far behind.

WHY BRIAN! godddd you are an idiot sometimes. i swear to goodness. i literally want to smack some sense into him, just because his stupid fiance walks into the room. dont just let her go and trail over to michelle like that! GOOOD LAWD im angry. >.> next chapter.

alright so i got to the next chapter. holy flippin cheese balls batman. wow. wow. wow. wow. so much emotion. i so did not expect leana to get up and leave! im actually relieved that brian was there though to grab her up, once again, i felt brians arms. god woman you make me feel like im in the story!

I DONT KNOW WHAT HAPPENED! but i stopped getting emails for this! :[ so you know what? im going to continue to read each chapter and comment on it, {: So i just read the one where brian was at jimmys grave. my heart literally stopped, i seriously closed my eyes and felt like i was there, i could feel the sunshine all around me, i could FEEL jimmy. you are brilliant.

I just want you to know that I cried at every sad part and I was listening to my ipod hoping seize the day wouldn't show up because I would cry and it's weird cuz it didn't. but my goodness this is a sad story. You should write a happy squeal or something andI keep hitting shuffle on my ipod to see if it comes up. All my other A7X came on but that one.

Jennifer that was amazing. And it's really weird cause I'm listening to Fiction as I was reading. And I still am. <3 Anyway. I love you, you are simply the best at everything you do. You write with such passion, and I really hope you'll write us another story when you can find the time. :]

I freakin love this story it's made me cry and smile a lot :) Awesome Story!!

it took me so long to read this last chapter because I had to keep stopping to wipe away the tears. You really do have a gift for writing, don't ever give it up. This story was so beautiful, and I loved reading it. I can't wait to read more of your stuff...as long as Brian's in it lol.

Alexx
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I'm so sad that this story's ending... But it's by far, the best story I've ever read on Mibba. Ever read, EVER. Better than actual books. You balanced Jen perfectly, not making her sickeningly flawless or dramatically desperate like other characters. All of the care from the surrounding characters made me smile. And you didn't make Michelle a complete bitch like most fangirls would have. You made all of the characters realistic and relatable. I love how you wrote out Jimmy, the words and feeling made me cry. Then again, all of the emotional parts in this story made me cry. You should continue writing, whether it's a sequel or not. Your writing is really touching. I hope to see your name in Barnes and Noble someday. :)

Aww Sugar! That was beautiful.. I wish it wasn't over. :( Please make a sequel!

love it!!! made me tear up a little lol
sequel or no???

Ok, I cried.

Wonderful, beautiful, amazing, inspiring, touching. That last chapter was all of those things. Though I am very sad to see that this story has come to an end, I loved every minute of it. It was simply amazing. The part with Jimmy was heartwrenching but therapeutic in a way. It made me so happy and sad at the same time.
I especially loved the end, and how much in love Jen and Brian are. It made my day.
Thank you for such a beautiful piece, dear. <3

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way to make me cry
i love the way you write the dreams; they capture the emotion so well.
Loved it!!!!<3

Jimmy's chapter was so beautiful, you are an amazing writer. You deffinetly captured Jimmy in that chapter.

Breathtaking!! I was sniffing throughout the chapter. Love it!

I'm trying not to cry :') You wrote that so well!

So I have read 15chapters in a day and I am still going, I can't stop reading them. You are an amazing writer, and this storie is so gut renchingly sad that I can't help but to cry when I read it. Your word are beautiful and I envy your writing skills lol. Please keep this storie going, I can't wait to keep reading.

Alexx
foREVer

:O Three updates?! Excuse me while I scream from absolute happiness! :D
I loved, loved, loved the chapter in Brian's point of view. I could actually feel the relief flooding through me as he realized that he was alive. I loved that chapter so much. And then Jen proposed to him! I was not expecting that AT ALL! But I loved it just the same! Your talent amazes me sometimes. ;) I love how Brian was freaking out because it wasn't the proper way to do it, and I'm glad he said yes. LOL at Johnny for his little outburst. Goddamn I love him so much. xD
YUS! She's pregnant! Guess who called it? Right here! ;) lmao. I was so totally stoked, and I'm not going to say I cried because I know it drives you crazy, but that chapter was really emotional. It was so saddening to feel the loss that Jimmy felt, but in a way relived that he was happy with all that was going on. My heart hurt after reading it though. :P
Loved it! Update soon!!! :D <3

I admit, I'm a big sappy baby!
Jimmy makes me weep like a baby! <3
Adorable, I loved it a lot. So cute =]