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  • Jennifer Mandeville

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    Hey guys. The next chapter or two should be up by tonight, tonight, or in the early morning at the latest :) I'm excited for these next few...and what's going to happen later on :D

    I've has some stuff happen that has given me really great ideas for the ending chapters.

    Thank you for reading <3
    August 13th, 2010 at 08:22am
  • Toy Robot

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    When she was describing jimmy leaving her I was crying! Your writing holds so much emotion, it's really beautiful! Can't wait for more! :)
    August 13th, 2010 at 03:38am
  • mcrgcvampress

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    Amazing!

    I was like why did Leana leave her? I know Brian was next to her but still why did Leana leave?
    August 11th, 2010 at 10:35pm
  • ItsLeoBiatch

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    WOW. This was the first chapter that really got to me.
    You're writing for sure isn't getting worse as the story goes.
    <3
    Keep it going!!!
    August 10th, 2010 at 08:48pm
  • JimmySullivan

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    i....am speechless. those two chapters were....absolutely, stunning. I felt every ounce of emotion that either of them was going through. i felt like i could see the dream, i felt like i couldnt breath when she couldn't. i swear this should be a novel and win some amazing prize because it is absolutely brilliant. your writing is amazingly strong and no it hasnt faltered at all. i cannot wait for this to continue. [:
    August 10th, 2010 at 01:37am
  • Toy Robot

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    This story is amazing! Your writing is incredibly well thought out and the plot is simply heart-wrenching! Can't wait to read more! XD
    August 9th, 2010 at 03:19pm
  • insearchofdreams

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    ahhh!!!! i've been reading all the chapters since like 3am. its 6:30 and i haven't been able to stop. you're writing is amazing. it's pure genius. i feel the gut-wrenching pain that Brian and Jen feel, it's insane. i love, love, LOVE the way you articulate their emotions, and the mixed point of views are awesome! it;s like they're two sides of the same coin. i am absolutely in love with this. thanks for the great night xD can't wait to read the next chapter.
    August 9th, 2010 at 01:28pm
  • JimmySullivan

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    OH MY GOSH! i swear to goodness my insides are jumping like freaking i dont even know. like that was the biggest build up ever and i absolutely loved the voices arguing! DAMNIT YOU ARE AMAZING! i can't wait to see what happens. im practically begging for more.
    August 9th, 2010 at 08:05am
  • Jennifer Mandeville

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    I will definitely have Chapter 10 up tomorrow night [August 8th].

    Thank you, again.
    August 8th, 2010 at 05:55am
  • JimmySullivan

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    i thought the three updates i hadn't read yet were amazing! I so wanted more though, i want to know whats going to happen! :o and yay for matt and val having a kid.
    August 8th, 2010 at 02:43am
  • Jennifer Mandeville

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    Thanks everyone! My story really needs this kinda support :P

    I'm not sure if I'll be updating incredibly soon because tonight I'm staying at my grandmother's and tomorrow I'm going on a day trip with her. She DOES have a computer so I'm going to try my best to write in her house...with people around... where I can't concentrate 0.0

    I will try! Promise :)
    August 8th, 2010 at 01:11am
  • mcrgcvampress

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    Amazing! I was like o.O haha love it!!
    August 7th, 2010 at 11:19pm
  • syncerelymikayla

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    FUCK YEA! :)
    I am hooked. You better write more soon.
    My eyes were glued to the screen...like this - O_O
    Heh! Absolutely lovely writing my dear. Always a pleasure to read such great stories.
    August 7th, 2010 at 01:41pm
  • give 'em hell peyton

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    fucking LOVE.
    August 7th, 2010 at 12:53pm
  • JimmySullivan

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    what is happening! i must know! :o
    August 7th, 2010 at 04:30am
  • burned hearts

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    I am loving this. But I am finding it a bit hard to read. Do you think that you could change the colour me the writing. It would make it easier. Update soon!
    August 6th, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • burned hearts

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    I am loving this. But I am finding it a bit hard to read. Do you think that you could change the colour me the writing. It would make it easier. Update soon!
    August 6th, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • burned hearts

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    I am loving this. But I am finding it a bit hard to read. Do you think that you could change the colour me the writing. It would make it easier. Update soon!
    August 6th, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • burned hearts

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    I am loving this. But I am finding it a bit hard to read. Do you think that you could change the colour me the writing. It would make it easier. Update soon!
    August 6th, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • burned hearts

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    I am loving this. But I am finding it a bit hard to read. Do you think that you could change the colour me the writing. It would make it easier. Update soon!
    August 6th, 2010 at 11:26pm