jesus fucking christ! I've just read this entire story from the beginning to where you've left off in (pretty much) one go. That's how good it is. *I seriously need to stop marathon-ing stories, it leaves me updateless*
anyways this story is insane and intense and I feel like maybe we should get a little more in depth with Garretts past? I mean he probably doesn't have skeletons by the dozen but it can't all be sunshine and rainbows. just a thought.
Suspense. >.< Sometimes, i just wish one of them vanished - it wouldn't matter who in the triangle, Gary, Nat, or John - and they wouldn't come back so the others could live in peace. But if that happened, there'd be no story and with no story, you'd have no comments. Then I wouldn't be here. But alas, I am, telling you I love this and I can't wait to read another chapter. :D