First of all, bow-chicka-wow-wow. Secondly, I was absolutely elated to find not one, but two chapters to read since I checked on this story last. In addition, I was completely swept up in the progression of things and how beautifully they flowed. Bravo, babe. Bravo.
Oh my god wow I was really not expecting that. Bravo, you sly writer you, that was great. God I want more seriously, update soon you can't just leave us all like this!
I swear, this is one of my favorite stories! I'm torn between John and Garrett. Natalie has two sides to her, the good girl and the bad girl (for shorter terms) It seems like both guys fill up both of her love tanks. It's between the boy that she's always been in love with and the boy who keeps her attention and who she can't get out of her head. I love Natalie and Garrett's relationship but i think John and her have something special going on, something that her and Garrett could never have. Such a long comment, but all in all i love this story and i can not wait for an update!
I kinda hope John doesn't have sex with her because that's a super low blow towards Garrett. I mean doesn't the whole bros before hoes thing apply? Aahah :)