This story is beautifully written. I freaking love it. I really like the way John and Garrett are competitive and how Nat isn't letting either of them win, even though it's looking like Garrett's already won. A part of me feels like it should be John, in the end, who is like, "Dude, you guys love each other, just admit it." I love how shy and sweet and adorable Garrett is in this, it makes me smile. If I were a team, I'd totally be Team Garrett. I pretty much just roll my eyes at everything John does. Please update soon, I'll be looking forward to it. <333
i love the story. and feel bad for what happened to Nat :( and i hope Garrett tells her how he feels cuz they are so cute together and she clearly has stronger feelings for him. update soon plz
I have to say that I really like this story. It's pretty awesome and interesting. I personally think that John has to be going against some sort of Bro Code by going after a girl he knows Garrett likes, but yeah. It's probably more interesting this way. Anyway, it's awesome and you should update soon, for sure.
i love this story, with all my heart. I get so excited for updates, and you do a really amazing job. I love your stories, and i always read them in a rush and never have time to comment and then forget and ahdsg i just love all of your writing. this one leaves me wanting more each time and i just cant wait to see what happens! i really hope you update soon <3
Ohh! I understand now. Poor Natalie! I don't like John in this story very much because Garrett and Nat are so cute and he's killing it. :/ But I loved the update! :}
hmm, okay. at the beginning/middle of the chapter, I was like NATALIE YOU WHORE WHAT ARE YOU DOING. but then toward the end, I realized that it kind of makes sense and she really has no reason not to do what she's doing. she's not committed to either of them and they both know that. sooooo, you should update soon.
I don't like Natalie at this moment. Why is she being so skanky?? I LOVE Nat, but at this point - where she's being very flirtatious - I kinda just want to kick her. No offense, haha. I love the story. :}
I am not exactly liking Natalie right now. She seems like a slut to me. She shouldn't toy with Garrett like that especially after she knows what happened between him and Rachel. I just don't like her character. Sorry.