She Had Me At Bonjour - Comments

Marcus! I knew he was a sleaze bag!

I don't like Not-Zack. Nope, no I don't like Not-Zack at all. There's always some trouble that comes with some asshole who gets all over a girl who is practically taken (or should be taken) then sleeps with her, then is all over her again. HONESTLY! Krysha, you should've seen this coming, but you didn't. Now you're gonna find out the hard way. Just like Zack is gonna find out all about Not-Krysha's diabolical plans.

I liked this chapter.
THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID!
Yesssssssssssss! I love those jokes. Kara and Zack are right like always. I like them better. Jack is just too cute(:
Update quickly. Soon. Now. Right now. Like right now. As of now. Right this second.

I WAS RIGHT!
I knew that Marcus dude was up to no good! That's basically cheating! He slept with Krysha! Wow, I hate him. Zack is wayyyyy better!
I'm on Kara and Zack's side. That was way uncalled for.
Oh, and that TWSS joke was funny, haha. I could definitely imagine Alex saying that.. Mostly because he did say it, haha. On the Straight to DVD outtakes, lmfao.
Anyways I love it Bailey! So update soon!<3

haha Jack, hes so straight forward xD
but! he does make sense, sometimes anyway
she brought marcus! why in hell's name would she do that
haha of course Alex is being nasty
and poor jack, his ball wont go in the hole xD
whoa wat! dating Kara's sister!
I knew he would be cheating on Krysh or something!
Yep, I was right, jeez Marcus is a doucher!!
UPDATE SOON!

HOLYMOTHEROFFUCK.
Marcus. You douchebag. -throws apples at him-
HOW.DARE.HE. >:|
GO KARA AND ZACK WOOOO!
I WILL KILL MARCUS. *death glare*
I hate you.
Oh Jack, so mature. <3
xD
TWSS joke, lmfao. Nice one.

Thank you for the advert. I LOVE YOU. <3

I WANT MOOOOOOORE.
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BAILEY NO WHY DID YOU DO THAT!?!?!?!
Noo, Marcus is not for her! She's so blind, it's so obvious Zack likes her!
Zack is the one she should have slept with last night! Not that Mr. I-put-up-a-nice-act-to-get-in-girl's-pants!!
Damn it, I agree with everybody else. Sorry! Oh, and I think Marcus and Krysha are the bad guys, haha. And I think they should make up and make out already.. xD
Oh, and I forgot! Sorry, I like the new layout(:
Update soon!

OHEMEFFGEE.
KRYSHA IS SO BLIND. TTTTTT________TTTTTT
DAMMIT WOMAN, GET IT ON WITH ZACK ALREADY MAGAWSH.
ZACK, GAWSHDAMMIT MAN JUST LOCK KRYSHA UP IN A ROOM AND DO WHATEVER. ;D
Marcus is nice though! Butbut he shouldn't steal Zack's woman.
AndAnd. Kara, Cree and I should knock some sense into them. :3
One night stands, missy? Not a good thing to do. It's a big no no!
Marcus should just...go away with Taryn. Or some other chick.

xxxx
PS. I will NOT slap you because your baby is beautifully written and I love it. :3

Kyrsha...wow...MAYBE IT'S BECAUSE YOU AND ZACK WERE MEANT FOR EACH OTHER! MAYBE THAT'S THE REASON NOBODY LIKES THIS MARCUS GUY!
Or maybe I'm delusional.

I can't believe she and Mr. Not-Zack buddy-boy slept with each other! HE POISONED HER, DIDN'T HE?! HE PUT ROOFIES IN HER DRINK!
Okay, maybe I'm just a tad caught up with the drama here.
I blame Taryn for getting into the picture. I really don't like Not-Krysha, she ruined everything. Had Not-Krysha not come into the picture, there wouldn't have been the Battle of the Jealousy in the Envy War, which means that Krysha wouldn't have had a one-night stand with Not-Zack and started dating him, and we'd all be happy.

Overall, fantastic update. I need to see what's gonna happen between all of these crazily wonderful characters.

Of course, the jealous game
she had sex with Marcus?!?! SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT NO NO NO NO NO
ahh this is gonna turn into more than Krysha expected :C
haha Jack is so straight forward xD
I kinda agree with Krysha, she didn't pick out the outfit
I think its more kidna Krysha's fault, she was wasted enough to sleep with him
but I think Krysha should find Marcus kissing another girl somewhere
while all of them are out together, and Taryn comepetly gets out of Zack's life
maybe they should stay mad at each other, maybe not
i do want them to make up eventually though :) haha
but do what you want, update soon!

She sleept with that Marcus guy!!! what!!!
I vote they should both shut their pieholes and make up!!!!!
;D

this story is amazing!! taryn is a bitch lol i dont like her

I like the new layout, its pretty :)
haha the "spinny bear" thing was so cute <3
oh no, i bet this taryn girl, and that one guy, is gonna cause drama
they kissed?!?! NOOOOOO!
Krysha obviously saw, she'll kiss that guy, more drama
then they'll b mad at each oher for a while,
then they'l make up nd be happy again
UPDATE!

ahhhhh zack what are you doing!!!! D:

ZACKY'S JEALLLOUUUUS<3
KRYSH'S JEALLOOUUUUS<3

Rian and Kara are so sweet together, just saying.

Urghhh, I'm killing Taryn. Stupid slut.
Get yo own man, woman! Zacky is for Krysha!(or Bailey)

xxx

My second toe is taller than my big toe too!
I always wish on 11:11 lol xD
Love this story to death :)
The end was cute with Krysh and Zack
Can't wait to read more!!

Bailey <3 :)
haha that was funny about the toes xDDDDDDDDDD
I love this story, its adorable <3 haha
that's pretty weird about the whole 11:11 thing, then he texts her at 11:12,
doo doo doo doo doo
random!! cree just walks in and says that, weirdd
haha i love Krysha, shes awesome :)
aww krysha is sweet for angela and jack <3 haha they make a cute couple
eww cree and alex has sex xDDDDD
they kissed agian! even if it was a little peck, it still was something haha

awwwww i love jack and angela xD
hahaha i love how he looked around before he kissed her

AWWWWHHHH BAILEY THIS WAS SO CUTE AND FUNNY AT THE SAME TIME, YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW IT. So, hahhahaa. Can I tell you I was laughing and smiling through the whole chapter? Lol, seeing my best friend in this made it 100000000x better! xD
Memorable things were:
"LET'S GET NAKED!!!"
"Angelalalalala, Kara's offending me!" xD Lalalaa, xDDDD
"Marry Me" Lmfao, I would be so sad if Jack did that in real life. hahha it was so funny!
Jack was shirtless, and Angela was swinging his shirt around(something like that.) Man, at that part I could NOT stop laughing, seriously. I could imagine Jack doing that! And I could Angela doing that too. lol. So funnny
And when Angela hid her face in Jack's chest, that was so ADORABLE!
I was seriously grinning like a mad-man. AWWWHHH!
XDDD
And Cree and Alex. Haha, having sex ALREADY?? Man are they some horny people xD
Zack and Krysha were cute as always. And I bet Zack bought that for her!
XD
Anyways, I have to cut it short cause I have to go off. But I'll leave a longer comment in the next chapter!
UPDATE SOON BAILEY CAUSE I LOVE THIS<33

OHGAWSH.

LMFAO. YOU MAKE ME :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD I COULDN'T BREATH! XD
I NEED TO TYPE IN CAPS 'CAUSE THIS IS HOW I EXPRESS MY FEELINGS STRONGLY.

ALEX HUGGING VITRUALLY THING WAS BRILLIANT.
HEY, HOW DID YOU KNOW I HAD A HIGH PITCHED VOICE?! STALKER. XD

"Marry me?"

I DIED. XD
LMFAO. THIS WHOLE THING MADE ME ROTFLMFAO.

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! <3
YOU ARE PURE BRILLIANT.

XXXX
MORE PLEASE<3

PS. I LOVE THE NEW LAYOUT. I LOVE THE HARBOR THING. IT'S BEAUTIFUL.

“LET’S GET NAKED!”

Oh. My. God.
That was pure perfection right there. I fell off of my chair laughing. I hadn't expected that.
This chapter was amazing. I cannot wait to see what's gonna happen at the party. I can't begin to imagine what you have in store for that one. This one was lovely and I loved it! I need to see the next chapter up soon. Like, really soon.

awwwww!
that is like the cutest thing ever and it sounds so perfect :')
i was crying too XD
and jack makes me laugh sooo much.
i can just imagine him doing and sayying the stuff
i just want a mini pocket jack to keep me amused.
not tooo much to ask :L
updateee :D <3