A Minute Longer - Comments

The layout for this was just beautiful, the colors of the picture along with the background fit so well together. This whole story was really good, I love how in the end she ripped up the note and left everything behind. It kind of shows how you have to move on from someone and how hard it is to get over someone at the same time. You did a great job on this. (: Again, I love the layout.

This was beautiful. It had raw emotion in and it is cute and I really enjoyed reading it. It was a really lovely job. You have a great way of putting imagery into ones head and it was just had such power with the emotions. It was wonderful. :3

DUDE, I LOVE YOU.

Not in a creepy way.

This was amazing.
Seriously.
The emotion in this was amazing.
You're descriptions and imagery were flawless.
I've never personally movied, but I've had tons of friends that have.

I think that this was an amazingly real piece and you did a beautiful job with it.

Ah, damn!
I am speechless xD
This is amazing and so emotional D:
I love it!
Amazing job <3

This was so wonderful! I really wanted to see what he wrote. It was so beautifully written and had a ton of emotions to it. You don't see a whole lot of that here. This is my favorite line: She blinked back the tears, told herself to be strong, and walked out of the house; leaving behind memories of whispered I love yous and hushed giggles. It's so cute, but so sad. :/
ANYWAYS, lovely job! <3

D: I wanted to see what he wrote!
xD
This was so good. It was written beautifully and had so much emotion in it.
It broke my heart a little and I kind of feel like crying now, but it was really good.
<3

i am impressed. this story is just heartbreaking.
i loved how she rips up the note at the end. serves cooper right.
the ending has to be my favorite part. all of it was so beautifully written though.
you have done an amazing job.

Before I began; You can get rid of those tiny lines before the story begins if you change the chapter title's color to white on the layout. (: Just saying. <3

I agree with Jacklyn. This was written beautifully. I loved all the detail in this--it just made the emotion and feelings in the piece all the more real. I really adored this even though it broke my heart while I was reading. I think I actually cried, aha. <3 But don't tell anyone, hee. x:

Amazing, Amazing Job.<3

This was so beautiful. So wonderful. I'm at a loss of words.
It's heartbreaking too and I actually almost cried.
The emotions are so raw and there I could feel it.
Amazing Job.

This is so good :)
It was wonderfully written

Aw, the emotion in this is pretty thick. It hangs nicely though, its not overbearing.
I also loved the positioning of the flashbacks and you didn't introduce them in a really drab way.

I loved this, good job! :D

The title sounds like a soap opera to me. o.- I dunno why, but it's pretty and dramatic. Like One Life to Live! :O

The layout is so freaking pretty. All of the colors match, and I just love it. <3_<3

The summary - song lyrics? I'm just guessing, but I like it either way. (:

But I'd Rather Us Live in The Present Day was amazing. I love everything you write. <3 It's impossible for me not to like anything. I didn't find any mistakes, so... YAY! :D

I loved this, hon. C:

You did an amazing job on this story.
It has a lot of emotion in it.
I really like it.
Good job.

OMFG GOOD JOB! I was actually interested and curious about what was going on. That doesn't happen too often, I tell ye, so I just had to start with writing that haha.

Okay, first of all the only negative thing; It always looks better when a new piece of dialogue is on a new paragraph. It makes it seem less messy, to be honest.

Other than that WOW. It was really sweet, and it was intense enough to keep my interest but it wasn't overly dramatic. I didn't get the feeling I normally get with stories like this, that the author is trying sooo hard for the story to be deep and descriptive that it ends up being too much.

I loved that she tore up the note and that we never got to find out what it said.
Good job. :D

I read it and it was BEAUTIFUL. You did such a good job. Normally I would have said this was cheesy, but I'm eating my words. You have made a magnificent creation and I applaud you!

I couldn't read this because I almost started crying.

Sydney is so not a good name for me to read. I just...I can't. It caused personal issues. It's heartbreaking.

Anyway. My apologies.

This was so heartbreaking! I actually cried a teeny bit! I really hope you win that contest, this story is amazing.

Awwwwwww!! I want to cryyyyy! I never want to move! Cooper is a jerk, and Sydney is such an awesome person for standing strong. Guys come and go, they'll always leave you in the end,

The layout is completely gorgeous, by the way. Good luck with your contest!

RAWR. This was wonderful.
Honestly, I adore the writing through this.
I don't even know what to say about it because it was wonderful.
gaaah