Philophobia - Comments

Retarded comment: Really good update, don't make us wait too long

Serious comment: Writing these chapters can get really awkward and I think you did just fine. I get very self-conscious about writing them too. So yeah, great job!

Hm, so a real comment?
Well I for think that you did a really good job on the "awkward lemon" scene. There wasn't too much detail actually. It seemed like it moved a bit too fast for a taking things slow scene but it was really good in the end.

Hm, so, I guess, now i'm just waiting for more drama. What kind of drama, I couldn't tell you. I'm no good at those things :)

I hope this was a proper enough comment! Anywho now that that's done...

HOLY SHIT! I LOVED IT! Update soon please?

mkay. so im not sure if i've commented on this yet. i dont usually mainly because i dont have the time since im usually reading everything on my phone while im at work (sneaky sneaky, i know. haha) but anywhoooo... i decided to comment today!! i read your authors note. and i have something wrong with this chapter. yes. i have found a flaw!

it ended. how dare you!! haha. kidding of course. it was.. amazing. incredible. perfect. lovingggggg!!!. im pretty sure my heart exploded with every word he spoke to her. hes perfect. <3

I think you did a great job at the scene, I really dont think any sex scene can be terribly written because you are writing it from your own point of view. Hope you update soon.

I thought the sex scene was good, I don't write them myself, but I've read quite a few.
The sex wasn't perfect, no sex is, especially first time sex... :)
Anyway, I checked out the sequel, and I can't wait for it, so update when you can, and I'm sorry I have nothing really constructive to say, but I didn't find anything really wrong with the story so far.

Well, seeing as I'm a virgin, and that's pretty much exactly how I write my sex scenes, I can't really tell you if you did well or not, but I rather liked it.
Val's going to walk in and flip her shit, though.
I just know it.
<3
Updates, soon, I hope!

This is amazing, I really don't think you can improve it at all.
It's already so amazing it's orgasmic. :D lol
& the sequel sounds great too!
Already subscribed to it<3
More soon puh-leasseeeeee.
Xoxo. Tina.

I'm a bit of a late reader but I'm subscribing :)
This story is really good, I love how Jimmy takes care of her - it's so sweet :D

love it.
im scared of the dark and im well into my teens :/ keep up the goood work (:

Oh shit! A drunk Jimmy and a drunk Nathalie doing the dirty?! Well this outta be interesting...

Nom,Nom,Nom!, thats what it sounds like when I eat up this story, thats a compliment by the way, I dont eat many stories. I love it that much. Awuh, I just love Jimmy-Poo, he's just so adorable with his singing and sliding across floors to try and trip Brian, can't wait to read moooorrrrreee.

Loved it ^-^ heheehe Jimmy<3 Update soon please :D

Loved it, they're starting to get frisky. (:

omg I want the nexzt chapter like like like now please!!!!! What's gonna happen in the elevator?????????????????????????? Aww the suspence its its killing me on the inside

sexytime!!!
I like drunk Nathalie, she's funny.
and another update! I like, love you man. :)
so yes. I loved this chapter, and I like where this is going. yes, i do. (sexytime!!!)
I'm done now, lol.

loooooooved it!!!
can't wait for more

Ooh, moreee ;))

can't wait till you update again!
:)
make it soon please!

GAH!
Just when I think this can't get any more awesome; guess what? It gets more awesome! XD
I'm lovin' how close Nate and Jimmy are; they are way too cute!

And what's that in the author's note about sexy time? I'll definitely bare with you! :D
Can't wait for more, so please update again when you get the chance!

Those last two chapters gave me a smile I need :)
They are both just too cute!
Can't wait for more. :D