Oh man, that's horrible. Poor Zacky. I hope those guys that did it get karma up the ass. But now it makes sense on why Zacky is so stuck to her. Can't wait for more<3
P.S. Sorry about the cousins deal. Mine are the same way, but lucky they never come to my place. I wish the best of luck to keeping sane. :)
This just........goddamn it. My God, Zacky. How....no wonder you wanted to tell someone (besides the guys) what happened. Keeping that shit...espically shit like that inside...it hurts. Like...you made me almost start bawling. I pray Gena's got someone in Heaven keeping her alright and keeping her comanpy. No one deserves that. And Zacky needs to stop beating himself up over it. Sadly (very very sadly) it happened and you cannot dwell on the past...Update soon please?
Aww poor Zack losing his girlfriend, it's obvious he's getting attached to Abigail in the sense he needs to look after her Brian's being a bit of a dick, I don't know why a young girl who's been abused by her father would try and do anything to ruin a good thing I'd love for another update!
Hey girl, I figured it was high time I gave you a damn good comment so here it goes.
I think this chapter was incredible, I love how you give out so much information even when it seems like your doing it so evenly. I wasn't even expecting that Zacky had lost someone but it does fit. As much as Brian is my hero I kinda hate what an asshole he's being, but I know that it's what's supposed to happen so I won't hold it against you :D
I can't wait, as much as I love this story I'm so excited for any prospective stories you have coming. It makes me sad that Jimmy's in this story even though he's wonderful, I love you and I'm sorry but this is like the longest comment I have ever written and that is completely sad.
Brian never even met the fucking girl and he is acting like a complete asshole who judges wayyy to fucking quickly. Dick. Anyway, this made me want to cry. I never wanna see them fight...that would tear me to pieces like it kinda is now. And Abbey (strange, she has my name...huh) does not even act like the sluts that hang around Avenged at all. Brian needs to grow the fuck up. Thanks for the update :))
How old is Abbey again.? And wow. . . I mean I know Brian can be a dick at some points , but in this story he seems like a dick 24/7 . And Jimmy . I mean Jimmy is supposed to be the one who cheers people up , not put them down o.o But its still a fabulous story !! HOW DO YOU DO THAT ?!?! I need lessons from where you learned how to write !! Thank you for the update even though writer's block is in your way ! Push through the writer's block because I need more of your story !!!! I dooooo !!! Update soon please [:
How old is Abbey again.? And wow. . . I mean I know Brian can be a dick at some points , but in this story he seems like a dick 24/7 . And Jimmy . I mean Jimmy is supposed to be the one who cheers people up , not put them down o.o But its still a fabulous story !! HOW DO YOU DO THAT ?!?! I need lessons from where you learned how to write !! Thank you for the update even though writer's block is in your way ! Push through the writer's block because I need more of your story !!!! I dooooo !!! Update soon please [:
At least Brian's being somewhat civil.
Can't wait for more<3(: