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  • mindblind

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    Damn. I do not see her leaving the guys any time soon.
    At least Brian's being somewhat civil.
    Can't wait for more<3(:
    February 11th, 2011 at 02:28pm
  • ellievengeance

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    awee poor zacky!
    but it does explain things I guess.
    Have I told you lately that I love this?
    cause I do :P
    January 22nd, 2011 at 07:58am
  • mindblind

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    Oh man, that's horrible.
    Poor Zacky. I hope those guys that did it get karma up the ass.
    But now it makes sense on why Zacky is so stuck to her.
    Can't wait for more<3

    P.S. Sorry about the cousins deal.
    Mine are the same way, but lucky they never come to my place.
    I wish the best of luck to keeping sane. :)
    January 16th, 2011 at 05:41pm
  • xmydecemberx

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    This just........goddamn it. My God, Zacky. How....no wonder you wanted to tell someone (besides the guys) what happened. Keeping that shit...espically shit like that inside...it hurts. Like...you made me almost start bawling. I pray Gena's got someone in Heaven keeping her alright and keeping her comanpy. No one deserves that. And Zacky needs to stop beating himself up over it. Sadly (very very sadly) it happened and you cannot dwell on the past...Update soon please?
    January 16th, 2011 at 01:18am
  • Perfect Exceeder

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    update soon please..?
    poor, zacky..
    and i understand why brian's being so rude..
    January 10th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • Kissing.Sin

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    Aww poor Zack losing his girlfriend, it's obvious he's getting attached to Abigail in the sense he needs to look after her
    Brian's being a bit of a dick, I don't know why a young girl who's been abused by her father would try and do anything to ruin a good thing
    I'd love for another update!
    January 9th, 2011 at 07:13pm
  • fightingthewolf

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    Hey girl, I figured it was high time I gave you a damn good comment so here it goes.

    I think this chapter was incredible, I love how you give out so much information even when it seems like your doing it so evenly. I wasn't even expecting that Zacky had lost someone but it does fit. As much as Brian is my hero I kinda hate what an asshole he's being, but I know that it's what's supposed to happen so I won't hold it against you :D

    I can't wait, as much as I love this story I'm so excited for any prospective stories you have coming. It makes me sad that Jimmy's in this story even though he's wonderful, I love you and I'm sorry but this is like the longest comment I have ever written and that is completely sad.

    Sorry :P

    Love you my wonderful oompa loompa lover :)

    Creech
    January 9th, 2011 at 02:52am
  • mindblind

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    Hiya, new reader.
    I absolutely love this story <3
    It's so original and captivating.
    I cannot wait for the next chapter to come out :D
    January 9th, 2011 at 02:47am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    loved it!
    January 9th, 2011 at 01:37am
  • xmydecemberx

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    Fuck :((((. I....Zacky :(((. Sweet baby Zacky. Oh my God. *tears up*. That was...beautful...more than beautiful....more than raw....just. Damn.
    January 9th, 2011 at 12:40am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    I really like it. It's spicy, well written and clearly comes from the heart. :) More soon? Please?
    December 28th, 2010 at 02:06pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    oh brian.... why you so mean!!
    December 27th, 2010 at 05:41pm
  • xmydecemberx

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    P.S. You can never lose writer quality unless you let is slip. Do not let it slip.
    December 27th, 2010 at 02:17pm
  • xmydecemberx

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    Brian never even met the fucking girl and he is acting like a complete asshole who judges wayyy to fucking quickly. Dick. Anyway, this made me want to cry. I never wanna see them fight...that would tear me to pieces like it kinda is now. And Abbey (strange, she has my name...huh) does not even act like the sluts that hang around Avenged at all. Brian needs to grow the fuck up. Thanks for the update :))
    December 27th, 2010 at 02:16pm
  • Austin Ashby

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    or commenting. . .
    December 27th, 2010 at 11:16am
  • Austin Ashby

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    sorry for updating twice O.O
    December 27th, 2010 at 11:16am
  • Austin Ashby

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    How old is Abbey again.? And wow. . . I mean I know Brian can be a dick at some points , but in this story he seems like a dick 24/7 . And Jimmy . I mean Jimmy is supposed to be the one who cheers people up , not put them down o.o But its still a fabulous story !! HOW DO YOU DO THAT ?!?! I need lessons from where you learned how to write !! Thank you for the update even though writer's block is in your way ! Push through the writer's block because I need more of your story !!!! I dooooo !!! Update soon please [:
    December 27th, 2010 at 11:15am
  • Austin Ashby

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    How old is Abbey again.? And wow. . . I mean I know Brian can be a dick at some points , but in this story he seems like a dick 24/7 . And Jimmy . I mean Jimmy is supposed to be the one who cheers people up , not put them down o.o But its still a fabulous story !! HOW DO YOU DO THAT ?!?! I need lessons from where you learned how to write !! Thank you for the update even though writer's block is in your way ! Push through the writer's block because I need more of your story !!!! I dooooo !!! Update soon please [:
    December 27th, 2010 at 11:15am
  • Jack Barakat; x

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    I am actually begging you here! I LOVE THIS STORY, PLEASE UPDATE! PLEEAAASSEEE?
    December 12th, 2010 at 01:54pm
  • ellievengeance

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    ahhh now I wanna know what happened!!!!
    December 12th, 2010 at 09:44am