Sick or Sane - Comments

The layout wasn't that bad.
It's just the font that doesn't do it for me.

But seriously, the whole thing was like oh ballsac.
That's scary just so you know.

I love it (: woo welcome to the darkside meliboo ! XD you're one of the many cool people with a twisted mind :D

That was dark. I think it's what you were going for, but I was actually kind of horrified when you described the killing. You slowed things down and it made it seem more...dramatic. It scared me, but I also liked it. Overall, not bad. I'd read more.

I liked the layout missypants. (:
It made it all the scarier, aha.
Makes me think of his cloudy mind. C:

For the most part, I agree with captain jack about the ending and the descriptions. I would've loved to see more vauge deets.<3The whole thing scared the pants off me, too, aha.

On the brightside: your writing had me hooked from the very beginning. It's easy to grab and run with until you reach the end. I really liked that. And even though it scared me, I really think this was a good story.

I enjoyed reading it. :)

The title is awesome, first. Second, the layout does not suck. And the summary - putting it bluntly - scared the living daylights outta me. I agree with captain jack. about the descriptions. It's a thing with us writers xD
Anyhoo, great job on this! Bill reminded me of, well, Bill from True Blood. I keep thinking of this as a True Blood fanfic without Eric and Sookie. I have no idea why xD
I enjoyed this and will be subbing <3

The title was nice and the mentions of it throughout the story were nice too. It kept the theme from falling apart. I'd have prefered to see a lot more description, but I'm pretty big on description so I can slack my grip a little, haha. I'd also prefer you went into the ending a bit more cautiously, it sort of lessened the effect your vague references were having. Overall however, it was good. I enjoyed it. :)

The title is pretty cool, actually.

The layout does not suck money balls. o.o

The summary is creepy as fuck and made me cringe.

Sick or Sane was not sane at all. Someone took hold me and then...darkness. I think there should be an of after hold.
I think you could've added more detail, but all in all, I liked it.

:D Good job.