August 8th, 2011 at 08:00pm
Ooooo, the layout is so creepy! And it really makes me think: Warning: Awesome story ahead. Yep, that's right. Layouts speak to me XD
The summary was superb! I love how it's all poem like and how it gives off a mixture of sad, horror, and a mysterious feeling. I seriously am subscribing to your story! =)
Ooo, I love the first chapter! However (only my opinion here) I feel that if you made the first part a prologue, it would be much more interesting. =) I love how you already have us introduced to the characters and how you totally had us hooked with the amazing detail here.
=O I didn't know we were allowed to use links in our stories! Aha, cool!
I can't wait to read more and I'm totally subbing so I can come back and read! <3
i also am fascinated by how the zombie epidemic is beginning. normally it's always some mess-up on a scientist's part, but this one began when the fish were contaminated right? i love the banner/layout pics at the top...
but, it does seem you have a few grammatical errors, just a few. but they turn off grammar nuts like me when we're reading through a story. a few spelling errors and so on. nothing that would be groundbreaking to the story if editted.
i sort of have to agree that the summary was a bit long-ish. i don't care much for lyrics in summaries, but hey, if that's how you wanted your summary to be, then keep it that way. just make sure the summary leaves readers with questions so they feel more inclined to read the story and follow it.
anyways. great story so far. it's a very creative story, so i hope you continue to write it. :)