I Will Never Forget That Night - Comments

Gasp, they're long lost sisters!!!!!!

I deifnitely love the story style.
You know, the shorter chapters.
It makes everything more suspenseful.

I lub ittttttt.
Please continuee. :)

...woah. I love it.
I hope they can stay.....until Amy finds everything out....

I love the style. Definitely interesting. Looking forward to more!

I found a couple typos...hope you don't mind me pointing them out...

Chapter 10--the last sentence says I smiled as I glanced up at Spencer and I allowed a small smile to find it's way on to my face. Which doesn't make a whole lot of sense, lol.

Chapter 12--the last sentence, it should be permanent not periment...i think...

Can't wait to see where this is going.
I'm in love with it.

I love this!
I really like the short chapters. it adds a nice effect to the story.
Ooooooooh! I love it(:
Update soon please!

-Alex

p.s. thanks for asking me to read it on my page! definatly worth my time(:

This is trippy, and exciting. I can't wait for more, this is really interesting.

I really like this story so far. The chapters are short but I think that adds to the story in itself because they really catch you attention and if you're an imaginative reader their length let you fill in the details. I'm really excited to see more of this Spencer fellow as well :)

I am in want to know about Alice o.o

Ooooo I woonder whats up with Alice. :o

Shelby would be correct. This story and writing style is interesting :D I believe I shall enjoy reading it ^_^ *subscribes*

I'm excited. More more more!
And other people need to comment on this. it's like, sex.

Since you spammed my page and told me about this [ just kidding, it's all good ] I read it. I like the new style. It's interesting. Your chapters are short but captivating; interesting the reader [ that would be me. ] I'm looking forward to seeing more of this story. :D

Mah homie.

Sorry, it was all so formal... I needed to add that xD