Out of Mind and Body - Comments

YOUR AMAZING!!!!

really good, write more!

haha i agree that your writing has gotten much better, but i don't think it was BAD before!! its just even better now :)) i'm glad they're together cuz i completely called that way back in the beginning of the first one!! and you're like nooo they're just friends and i had said that i wished they would love each other and NOW THEY DO HAHAHAHAHA. suck it. haha jk.

it's really good. i love it. i like the part with the little girl. write more soon. :)

ohhhh myyyyyy Goddddd it wasss so amazinggggg I lovedddd itttttt I can't wait for another chapterrrr <3

Aww! The little girl at the end was cute :]
I hope she is okay!! I like Mark's point of view

awwww. i like it a lot better from mark's point of view, so i really really hope you keep it that way. it seems like this one is gonna be better than the last, so i'm pretty excited. haha, at first i didn't realize it was from mark's point of view and i still thought it was rosanna. well please keep writing it!! if not for the world of mibba if no one reads it (they're stupid if they don't) just for me! i love you :))