I really like your story! The only thing I don't like is Leana. I'm sorry to say but that girl has lost all of my respect. I have never disliked one of the girl friends but she changed my mind about that when she decided to get the tattoo of jimmy removed from her finger, and move onto another guy after only a few months of jimmy's passing.
Zacky! <3 I love how the first thing she said when she woke up was "Are you really gonna buy me another puppy, Zacky?" ! Haha Awesome story! Can't wait for more updates :3