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  • LetsGoPens

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    Thanks for updating and this was a great chapter and I hope your dad is ok. My prayers are with you guys and for those who don't respect you caring for your dad they can screw off. But like I said I hope he's ok and I will keep you and your dad in my prayers ^_^
    September 9th, 2010 at 12:29am
  • solita

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    ......Wow.
    This story is just.....wow.
    O_O
    I have no words...just awesomeness.
    Woah-wow.
    Damn, this story is gonna be pure awesomeness.
    :O
    September 4th, 2010 at 05:16pm
  • Shadow's Gates

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    “Huh. You look like Christmas, Frankie.” - you never fail in making me laugh!!! i'm wondering why i haven't found this story but i must say i love it and i really enjoy it. please update as soon as possible! i would make you a banner but unfortunately, i don't know how to.
    August 25th, 2010 at 10:46am
  • Shadow's Gates

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    okay, now i'm reading chapter 4, yet again you made me laugh my ass off- “Thanks,” Brian huffed, glaring playfully at Dana, arms crossed over his chest. “Now I smell like a fucking mango.”
    August 25th, 2010 at 10:18am
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    Poison? Death? How about arsenic pie? - i'm reading chapter two right now and i have to say that was fucking hilarious!!
    August 25th, 2010 at 09:59am
  • justhannah;

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    I'll try to make a banner! :3
    haha
    this story's so freakin funny! update soon!
    August 16th, 2010 at 12:25am
  • honeybee-red

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    I'm smitten with this. :)
    August 15th, 2010 at 07:35am
  • SurfSkittles

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    i absolutely love this story. love love looooooove it! i can't wait to see how the date goes. zacky is jeaaaaaalous! mwahahahaha.
    August 15th, 2010 at 02:06am
  • wickedsakura

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    Duuuude. So I read this yesterday but totally forgot to comment. Bahaha. I'm a bad reader I know. But I am commenting now!! Loved the update! And I want to see more very fucking soon!

    <33
    August 14th, 2010 at 03:52pm
  • Lady_Dee11

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    Haha...I love Jimmy!!! Great update!!!
    August 14th, 2010 at 09:02am
  • asylum's riot.

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    Ooooo I'll make a banner! :D and specific pictures? And when does it have to be done by? Cuz I can't start until tomorrow...
    August 14th, 2010 at 05:48am
  • allzac

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    <3
    August 14th, 2010 at 05:44am
  • to the ocean;;

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    OKAY. I just read all of what you posted, and I must say, this is a very entertaining story. I absolutely love it. There hasn't been one moment where I wasn't either smirking, smiling, or laughing, and for that, I thank you. (:

    Jimmy is most definitely my favorite. It's just hard to beat that lengthy motherfucker, though I must admit, I really like Zack's character, too. Oh, and Brian's, and... You know, I really just like your characterization. I guess that's just the bottom line. It's pretty great. :D

    And, I believe in chapter three, it was, you mentioned Eighteen Visions, which gave you like, seven million brownie points in my book.

    This is so wonderful. I shall be waiting for your next update. (:
    August 14th, 2010 at 03:34am
  • Insane.

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    aaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
    funniest chapterrr
    loved it cant wait for more!
    August 13th, 2010 at 11:59pm
  • KnifeMistress

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    Pfffft Jimmy is such a cutie. I hope he wins Frankie's heart eventually, and that she does not uses him to get back to Zacky. I'm loving how you are going slow with this and you are not rushing things. In most fanfics she would have kissed one of the boys by now, but I prefer it like this, It makes this more realistic.
    So Keep writing and I will keep on reading ;)

    ps: GO JIMMY TEAM!
    August 13th, 2010 at 11:50pm
  • ambeymaree

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    I just started reading it && I absolutely love it.
    Can't wait for more!
    August 13th, 2010 at 10:42pm
  • Krista-Snaps

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    My favorite parts were when Jimmy was shaking his fist at the sky and when he licked her.
    More soon, please? =)
    August 13th, 2010 at 10:32pm
  • efflorescxnt

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    Haha she fucking cursed the fuck out of claire. her and jimmy are cute but I like her and zackys love hate relationship better.
    August 13th, 2010 at 10:32pm
  • Lexi Munroe

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    Aw, Jimmy. He's amazing. I honestly wasn't expecting Frankie to be asked to go on a double date with him. If anything, I was expecting it to be Zacky. But Jimmy is hysterical, so it's okay. I really like his spastic persona and the fact that his scrawny ass somehow managed to kick in his locked door. Beast, much?
    I have to agree with PoeticMess., she better not use Jimmy to get back at Zacky. I would be upset. I mean, Zacky is a dick in this story and deserves some heartache but Jimmy didn't do anything.
    And Super Smash Bros = win. Best series game next to The Legend of Zelda.
    August 13th, 2010 at 10:07pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    awwww her and jimmy were cute!!
    does she like him!!! xD
    August 13th, 2010 at 10:06pm