La Vie En Rose - Comments

Ahhh! I love this! It's actually really really good too! Like I lbe how developed the characters are and the plot itself. Also, your writing style is fantastic! I typically wouldn't read something like this, but I am so hooked on this! Update soon! Great job!

UPDATE!!!!!!!

On the grounds of not listening to The Maine, but knowing of them and John O'Callaghan; I'll have to use my mild Critique mind again.

The background in the story doesn't seem like it would connect with the story to me. By just reading the summaries dialogue, it seems interesting if a John O'Callaghan fan was reading it, and I agree with John - a 1960's Mercedes Benz isn't done justice by sitting in a garage just rusting away; they need love and attention like a dog.

You have some massive paragraphs going on in some places, and that might make some reader's dread reading the story, because even a short chapter can look longer than crap with just one long as hell paragraph.

Please continue to write your story, because you have to have a lot of people liking it.

I just finished reading the entire thing and I would seriously love it if you could update soon!!!

okay hi wow I just read this whole thing all of yesterday and today and I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS OKAY. please please update this soon!

Love this :)

I already feel like I'm not liking Jack, simply because he sounds like someone who could cause some trouble for John and Gigi...

I sense drama approaching?

no no no go back....

found this fic on a good day i guess! just started reading and glad you're back :-) i seriously love garrett and kenny, they're just so cute and funny. pretty sure i laughed out loud during their drunken escapades awhile back :-) anyway please update soon!!

haha lets do this! lol

I love their relationship. It gives ME the butterflies.
And the ending, LOL.

omg yay new chapter!

AHHHHH! i'm so glad this updated again! I always use to come back and reread the old chapters because I liked this john story so muchhh!

I am soooo glad you updated this story! This chapter was so good. Can't wait for the next one :)

Ahhhh!!! I'm so excited you didn't just push this story under the rug for forever! I love it! Update sooner than last time, though, would ya? Hahahah

I was just thinking about this story the other day! I'm so glad you updated and so excited!!! Shit's gonna only get harder for them, but I'm excited to see where that all goes! Hopefully, you'll update soon!

holy shit i love this so much

Aw, just catching up on this story, love it already, hope there will be another update soon. Gigi and John are just so cute:)

This was really cute.[: That's why I like Comment Swap. It lets you read things you normally wouldn't hah. But yeah. The descriptions were great, which I find as an important part of writing. Super duper adorable.[: