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  • miss myself

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    Hey, I'm really enjoying your story, -which is strange 'cos normally I don't like fanfic- the one thing I have to say is don't try to put too much drama in all at once or it just ends up like an episode of the Bold and the Beautiful. But of course you need to have some drama or things just get boring. The character development is really good though. I would have like to have more of the letters people sent Phoenix but that's just me. I love Nevershoutnever so I like that little parts with Cris in it.
    Anyways, after this very long comment, I can't wait for the next update and I hope I haven't offended you in anyway and if I have I am really sorry.
    xox
    September 22nd, 2010 at 05:41am
  • AllTimeLizz

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    YAY! *does happy jig* uh, oh *falls* ummm sooo anyway YAY! alex <3 mona :D" this is all happy-makin'
    (*BTW This is RockellaCullen*)
    September 22nd, 2010 at 02:34am
  • yournightmareXO

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    aww finally got to read the last chapter! omg! Envy what r u doing to urself? :(
    and that moment when Phoenix said: "i hate rockstars, i hate u" gosh that sentence was really strong.... woah, poor Alex :(
    but wait, whats happenin to Phoenix now? im dying of curiosity!! i love drama xD

    omg, guys! are u fucking serious? where are all these awesome comments? come on, are u all blind? new chapter is up!!!
    September 19th, 2010 at 04:08pm
  • yournightmareXO

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    OMG! Alex was so worried about him, awww :( like a real father :)
    but no way, u cant kill Emma?! say u wont kill her :( and poor Phoenix blames himself again :(
    aww i really love how u write things down, so full of emotions. cant wait for more, im curious!
    *wishthisstoryneverhasanend*
    September 13th, 2010 at 08:34pm
  • let's make believe.

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    Sorry I didn't comment on the last couple chapters or so. I didn't have internet access. =( But thank god Emma wasn't kidnapped! Update soon!!! Oh, and I know you probably don't need to know this, but my birthday is on Tuesday... lol I shall be 15! x]
    <3Haylee
    September 12th, 2010 at 03:56am
  • AllTimeLizz

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    NO! so so so soooo sad :( Jack is gonna be pissed and Alex is gonna be pissed and understanding (Hopefully!)
    September 12th, 2010 at 02:48am
  • yournightmareXO

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    aww that chapter was so cute! Daddy moments :D HA i was laughin so hard at this: "'You're-to-young-to-have-kids" sermon." xd lol.
    gosh! cliffhanger! ahh cant wait to find out what is up with Emma :)
    lol i realized just by now, i always type Phoenix's names wrong. lol srry about that. but now i know the right spelling :D still amazing <3
    September 10th, 2010 at 03:29pm
  • yournightmareXO

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    finally im readin again :D i just got back from a festival where ATL, Simple PLan, Blink and many more bands were performing :D
    so....
    aww Phenoix's making new friends, so cute <3 and everybody is so nice to him :))) i loved in the previous chapter how he didnt realize he was talking to Chris INgle xD :)
    awww the end was makin me worried, Phenoix Envy is just such an awesome person, he cares so much about Emm, i hope she will get back soon. im wondering why she got lost, maybe she wanted her bridie back <3 poor Phenoix :(

    *just a lil side note: i love so much the idea you name the chapters after song's titles <3
    September 8th, 2010 at 04:05pm
  • Kaylabelle

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    I love this story!! Please update soon! Please!!
    September 8th, 2010 at 04:00am
  • let's make believe.

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    NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!!!! Emma has to be okay!!! They have to find her!!!!!!!! Update soon!
    September 8th, 2010 at 03:56am
  • AllTimeLizz

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    NOOOOO!!! awwww they gotta find her! and he MUST c her again! As an avid reader i am DEMANDING it
    September 8th, 2010 at 03:17am
  • AllTimeLizz

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    I love love love this story can't wait to find out how they get along....
    September 6th, 2010 at 05:45am
  • LeT_ThE_rAiN_cOmE

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    Your story is amazing!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Update soon!!!! (=
    September 5th, 2010 at 08:51am
  • Jinx Ransom

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    Im adoring this story so much! update pleaaaase? :)
    August 31st, 2010 at 09:03pm
  • yournightmareXO

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    OMG! im so sorry i wasnt able to write any comments on here, i just got home from our vacation. but i was like WTF! i got to read like 5-6 chapters! and it's still so awesome!!! gosh i wish i could comment to every chapter. i think u just getting better and better at writing. but woah. cant tell how much i love this story. and im glad Phenoix is gettin happier and everything. that phone call w Emma was so so cute <3 i love how she calls him "birdie" :D and those awesome Jack-Phenoix moments. gosh u made my day <3 keep this great work up <3
    August 31st, 2010 at 06:51pm
  • jaylon1134

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    this is a very great story
    August 30th, 2010 at 04:10pm
  • stryped

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    3 WOOTs for you! WOOT WOOT WOOT!!! havent been on in awhile to comment but im sitting at the cafe drinking tea and reading your story on my ipod and i freaking love it!!!
    August 30th, 2010 at 05:34am
  • Kaylabelle

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    I love this story..
    I can't wait to see where this goes.. =]
    August 30th, 2010 at 04:20am
  • cobra9874

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    i like this story im on chapter 15 and honestly i think that jade alex and jack are all pointless characters
    August 27th, 2010 at 02:15am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    When I first started reading this I was like 'This is gonna get boring.."

    Now I'm like. "OH MY GAWD! I LOVE IT!"

    Update soon?

    -subscribes-
    August 25th, 2010 at 02:56am