Hey, I'm really enjoying your story, -which is strange 'cos normally I don't like fanfic- the one thing I have to say is don't try to put too much drama in all at once or it just ends up like an episode of the Bold and the Beautiful. But of course you need to have some drama or things just get boring. The character development is really good though. I would have like to have more of the letters people sent Phoenix but that's just me. I love Nevershoutnever so I like that little parts with Cris in it. Anyways, after this very long comment, I can't wait for the next update and I hope I haven't offended you in anyway and if I have I am really sorry. xox
aww finally got to read the last chapter! omg! Envy what r u doing to urself? :( and that moment when Phoenix said: "i hate rockstars, i hate u" gosh that sentence was really strong.... woah, poor Alex :( but wait, whats happenin to Phoenix now? im dying of curiosity!! i love drama xD
omg, guys! are u fucking serious? where are all these awesome comments? come on, are u all blind? new chapter is up!!!
OMG! Alex was so worried about him, awww :( like a real father :) but no way, u cant kill Emma?! say u wont kill her :( and poor Phoenix blames himself again :( aww i really love how u write things down, so full of emotions. cant wait for more, im curious! *wishthisstoryneverhasanend*
Sorry I didn't comment on the last couple chapters or so. I didn't have internet access. =( But thank god Emma wasn't kidnapped! Update soon!!! Oh, and I know you probably don't need to know this, but my birthday is on Tuesday... lol I shall be 15! x] <3Haylee
aww that chapter was so cute! Daddy moments :D HA i was laughin so hard at this: "'You're-to-young-to-have-kids" sermon." xd lol. gosh! cliffhanger! ahh cant wait to find out what is up with Emma :) lol i realized just by now, i always type Phoenix's names wrong. lol srry about that. but now i know the right spelling :D still amazing <3
finally im readin again :D i just got back from a festival where ATL, Simple PLan, Blink and many more bands were performing :D so.... aww Phenoix's making new friends, so cute <3 and everybody is so nice to him :))) i loved in the previous chapter how he didnt realize he was talking to Chris INgle xD :) awww the end was makin me worried, Phenoix Envy is just such an awesome person, he cares so much about Emm, i hope she will get back soon. im wondering why she got lost, maybe she wanted her bridie back <3 poor Phenoix :(
*just a lil side note: i love so much the idea you name the chapters after song's titles <3
OMG! im so sorry i wasnt able to write any comments on here, i just got home from our vacation. but i was like WTF! i got to read like 5-6 chapters! and it's still so awesome!!! gosh i wish i could comment to every chapter. i think u just getting better and better at writing. but woah. cant tell how much i love this story. and im glad Phenoix is gettin happier and everything. that phone call w Emma was so so cute <3 i love how she calls him "birdie" :D and those awesome Jack-Phenoix moments. gosh u made my day <3 keep this great work up <3
3 WOOTs for you! WOOT WOOT WOOT!!! havent been on in awhile to comment but im sitting at the cafe drinking tea and reading your story on my ipod and i freaking love it!!!
Anyways, after this very long comment, I can't wait for the next update and I hope I haven't offended you in anyway and if I have I am really sorry.
xox