Only in a Dream - Comments

wow
the fashing border really is distracting

yeah. its i did describe my characters good in my other stories... i think. this story is based on a dream i had... weird i know

I'd be surprised if anyone who joined Mibba didn't like writing. (some form, Stories, poems, songs.) This is really good, and I agree that the characters need to be described a little bit more. Thumbs up on this though! :D

i luv writing stories

hmmm. I love this idea(:
the characters are good, just not exactly completely,...solid.

Can't wait for more!

sorry i haven't made a background for this story yet

I like this story so far, but I must say, the flashing border is a little distracting lol

Some advice- try to take the time to expain things moe instead of rushing through things. Slow it down a bit and describe what's going on. What hotel are they staying at? What do the characters look like?

But other than that, I like this story :]

I'm just writing this comment as a way to get the comment ball swinging But it's going to be very very lame due to my eyes closing in on me, ever so quickly...so this is just a promise comment that I'll read up later...