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  • greyeyes-darkskies

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    ugh i was so team garrett and then he screwed up and john started being a good friend and GAH!!!
    August 16th, 2012 at 03:56pm
  • kaitlyn5056

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    I CRIED. SO MANY TIMES. AND WHEN I GOT TO THE END I STARTED BAWLING. THIS IS PURE AMAZINGNESS. I LOVED IT SO MUCH.
    August 14th, 2012 at 10:11pm
  • purple_em

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    I reread the entire thing. And I think I got a tear in my eye a couple times.
    November 20th, 2011 at 03:12am
  • skatmurph24

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    This story was absolutely perfect. I've literally been sitting here all day, glued to it. John's last letter was perfect. Great job :)
    October 31st, 2011 at 05:21am
  • becauseiamfree

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    im only on chapter 10 but i just wanted to tell you that with every chapter this story is taking away my social life.
    im in love
    thank you <3
    October 22nd, 2011 at 02:11pm
  • itsahit

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    Bree, I love you. I love this story and though it was a little cheesy, I loved the ending. And, if you so decide to write a story about Amy and Garrett, I am totally giving you the go ahead. In fact, I am requesting that you do because I want to know what happens. :)
    I loved the lost letter, I love that John left his car running and ran to Maddie, but my favorite thing about this last chapter was the one line - "I can’t love you from far away."
    March 18th, 2011 at 07:38am
  • Howl's Castle

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    Gah it was so clever with the letter thing.
    I'll admit I cried.
    March 17th, 2011 at 10:27am
  • GalaxyDefend3r

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    The ending was wayyy more than i could have ever wanted. It was flawless!!! You are such a phenominal writer!!! I am so sad to see this story end. I am a new reader to this and i couldn't stop! I spent a lot of the free time i had in the last two weeks reading every word of this! It will always be one of my favorite stories on here.

    I plan on reading everything you have writen on here, so you can expect to see more comments from me ;) lol
    March 17th, 2011 at 04:17am
  • ForeverADreamer

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    So, I just read the last chapter, and I wanted to let you know that I really really loved the story. I think you're an amazing writer and I can't wait for you to start writing more for your new story. If I could, I would write the way you do because it's just so good. Just thought I'd let you know :)
    March 16th, 2011 at 11:10pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    This is so amazing, I love that ending! I too, am such a sucker for happy endings. Those and sappy love songs hahah. But really, this ending is definitely one of the best that I've ever read.
    March 15th, 2011 at 11:06pm
  • iammadison.

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    THE RAIN. Ahh, it was perfect!
    I admit that I kinda teared up when she said goodbye to errrrbody... :(
    I like happy endings. :)
    March 15th, 2011 at 10:56pm
  • draloliane

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    wooooooooooo omg i had flipping tears omg.. <333 so sweeet i love it <3333333 is he actually gonna keep his promise? hmmm
    March 15th, 2011 at 10:50pm
  • feelingsintowords

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    That was so great! I'm really happy John realized they had to be together!
    Can't wait for your next story, : ).
    March 15th, 2011 at 10:25pm
  • CountEmOneTwoThree

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    The ending was brilliant. I have to say this was one of my favorite fan fiction stories ever. You had me crying at all of the last goodbyes and mentally slapping John way more than once. At first I was skeptical about how the story could end in just one more chapter, but it was perfect. You have a talent for writing, and I would definitely be interested in reading more of your stories. :)
    March 15th, 2011 at 09:51pm
  • SweetPea

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    Aaaahhhhh! That had me nearly in tears!
    Sad to see it go:(
    But happy ending? Hell yay!
    Epilogue maybe??
    March 15th, 2011 at 10:48am
  • allzac

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    That ending was amazing. I have to say you are a great writer. This story and the prequel are both really good. Hopefully you continue to write, because i would love to read your other stories.
    March 15th, 2011 at 06:59am
  • BriNANA

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    i loved it!!! i was worried at first that he wouldn't show, but he did :3
    finally he came to his senses and decided to take a chance with her <3
    March 15th, 2011 at 06:26am
  • vexation

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    Thank you. Now I am crying. I feel like this is my best friend and now my bestie is gone. But it was so beautiful that I don't even care. So terribly amazing.
    March 15th, 2011 at 06:18am
  • Aly!

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    You made me cry. I can't believe that it's over!!!
    God, as I type this I still have tears streaming down my cheeks.
    The ending was just perfect, the goodbyes were so sad...especially Garretts.
    But in the end John and Maddie found their way back to each other.
    <3
    March 15th, 2011 at 06:12am
  • raja sahara

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    I'm sad its over :( This was a great story! The prequel and thisssss. You are a wonderful writer, and this story was amazing :)
    March 15th, 2011 at 06:10am