Weak, But Not Defeated - Comments

  • die kleine Sonne

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    <3
    March 11th, 2011 at 06:05pm
  • amberBELA

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    FANTASTICAL. I can't wait to read this last chapter.
    March 11th, 2011 at 07:03am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    March 11th, 2011 at 04:32am
  • SweetPea

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    Haha John. All slouched and Pouty!
    Garrett should've been in the speech. It was only right that way.
    March 11th, 2011 at 04:07am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    what is wrong with John?! Well hopefully, (wink wink) he'll decide to make things official and live happily ever after with Maddie in the last chapter!
    March 11th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • Bubbleloveworld

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    this is like a motivational moment in one awsome burrito of a story
    March 11th, 2011 at 02:52am
  • just breathe

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    This has been one of my favorite stories. I can't believe it's ending! :(
    March 10th, 2011 at 10:43pm
  • la dispute.

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    I can't even feel bad for John, because.he did that to himself.
    I loved Garrett and Maddie in this chapter! They were so cute
    And her speech was beautiful!
    It's.funny how well those lyrics.fit most of life's situations! Lol.:)
    March 10th, 2011 at 02:28pm
  • aaaxelsson

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    woah, this chapter was amazing. i kind of started to cry at the very last sentence!
    March 10th, 2011 at 02:23pm
  • itsahit

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    I laughed so hard... well, first I was upset because John is being a jerk. You wait all this time to be with the girl you love only to be like, "oh, well, I wanna sleep around on tour." BUT I got Garrett!!!
    I love the way you wrote me, and the whole “we’ve got the cute thing where she fits right under my chin. It’s sort of adorable,” line made me smile so big. I think Garrett and Amy will have a very happy, loving, albeit extremely sexually active relationship.
    But, even though I got to be in the chapter, I loved the valedictorian speech. I love that she kind of threw it back in John's face by talking about how great my boo is, and then using John's lyrics. This chapter made me really happy. I love that Maddie thinks I'm cute. Yay! But I think Maddie's gonna realize that she kind of put her all her eggs in one basket for John. If he wants her, then it shouldn't matter if they're apart.
    March 10th, 2011 at 09:41am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    Oh Maddie, Maddie, Maddie.... how I love her so... yet - I'm still nervous. The next one is it!?!?! It's all over?!?!

    YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME WITH HER GOING TO COLLEGE! YOU JUST CAN'T! I WON'T ALLOW IT. I need to know her and John get married and have babies. I need all of that!
    March 10th, 2011 at 09:26am
  • BriNANA

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    duuuuuuuuuuuude i wish that was a speech at my graduation!! and garrett is so cute :3 he deserved the recognition for sure. john can suck it upppp!!
    March 10th, 2011 at 08:12am
  • Aly!

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    Oh my god.
    So I have to say, Garrett deserved to be recognized in her speech. He was ALWAYS there for her. Even after everything that happened between them, he was still there for her.
    The quote at the end just seemed so perfect.
    I wanna know how this story ends and what happens with John!!
    please update soon(:
    March 10th, 2011 at 07:45am
  • supbaker

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    Team John still hahaha
    March 10th, 2011 at 07:38am
  • therandaset

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    askljfsdgj I LOVE THIS STORY.
    March 9th, 2011 at 03:01am
  • learningtobefree

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    This story is amazing!
    Hope John hasn't fucked up or anything :/
    March 9th, 2011 at 12:14am
  • itsahit

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    My tears fall for your car.
    I love that her father referred to Pat as "that small, weird one that needs to cut his hair." I have to say that I was surprised that Garrett came to visit her in the hospital, but I'm glad he did. I have a bad feeling about why John was avoiding the conversation at the end though.
    March 8th, 2011 at 05:47am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    March 8th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • kaitlynncsws

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    i actually thought that the little hospital scence was the ending :(
    but then you said a few more chapters yesssss<3
    March 8th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • aaaxelsson

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    garrett is so cute! and so is eric, haha, love this story! :D xx
    March 7th, 2011 at 04:32pm