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  • liar's lane.

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    Oh, and you're welcome for page three. Haha
    September 28th, 2010 at 07:12am
  • liar's lane.

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    I love Garrett. Wow.
    Thank you<3
    September 28th, 2010 at 07:12am
  • kaitlynncsws

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    ghedfakjndakgjnas omg this is fantastic.
    sdfklgs i love you
    September 28th, 2010 at 07:05am
  • itsahit

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    My boy! I think they're so cute together. This made me super happy.
    September 28th, 2010 at 05:09am
  • vexation

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    For all his douscheyness (is that even a word?) I am definitely pro-John. Like if he gets his head out of his anus it shall be epic haha.
    September 28th, 2010 at 04:41am
  • kaitlynncsws

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    AHHHHHHHHHH i am about to die.
    they're so cute. omg.
    September 25th, 2010 at 09:14pm
  • loveyme435

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    I think Garret and Maddie should be together:) They would be so cute:) Please update soon!
    September 25th, 2010 at 04:36pm
  • screamedlullaby

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    Basically, in this story John can go jump off a cliff. Garrett ftw!
    September 25th, 2010 at 02:05pm
  • slashXdash

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    Maddie should say yes. That's what Maddie should do, and anything otherwise should result in a heavy assault to the face. :D
    Don't ask where that came from... Anyway, lovely chapter! I do like how jerkish John is being and becoming, I understand where he is with the pain from Maddie leaving, but its nearly obvious that he's forced himself to get over her. As for Kennedy, I like him with Maddie but Garrett is... it's Garrett, he deserves to win in life! :D
    September 25th, 2010 at 10:11am
  • vexation

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    SHE BETTER SAY YES OR ELSE I WILL HIT HER WITH A BIG BAG OF STUPID. That made no sense. I havent slept in awhile. I love this story :)
    September 25th, 2010 at 08:00am
  • itsahit

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    Yes! That is my man!
    September 25th, 2010 at 07:46am
  • kaitlynncsws

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    ,gehdfskjhjdskf i heard team garrett.
    omg. i don't think i can wait a week.
    ahhhhh
    September 21st, 2010 at 08:30pm
  • screamedlullaby

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    Well played, Maddie, well played.
    September 21st, 2010 at 01:30pm
  • itsahit

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    I love this story, as you already know. I am team Garrett. I am super excited for the next chapter. Maybe they can make out and have sexytime because he deserves it more than either boy. Am I the only one?! Haha. This next chapter is going to be the best, I can sense it.

    “You should have hit him back, Kenny! I totally had my money on you,” Pat said.
    That made me giggle. I love Pat.
    September 21st, 2010 at 09:17am
  • Franceschi;

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    Team Kenny FTW
    the ending was sooooo great but now you have to update like ... today!
    "Screw this"
    *melts*
    September 17th, 2010 at 08:37pm
  • vexation

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    John is so seriously just like asking for me to beat him up I think haha. I really loved the update :)
    September 17th, 2010 at 03:13pm
  • itsahit

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    John is a dumb boy. He has Maddie wrapped around his finger and breaks her heart. Now he's jealous? If he had her then why would he hurt her? So stupid.
    Kennedy is a sweetheart, but the drama with having Maddie's niece as his daughter? WAY too much drama.
    This is why I am team Garrett. Even though I was disappointed that he wasn't a good date and tried to hook up with someone else. They should've had their New Years kiss together, but that part where Kennedy and Maddie were outside was beautifully written.
    “You could break any girls heart with a smile like that, Kennedy.”
    “Even yours?” he asked.
    “Especially mine,” she said quietly as they started intently into each other’s eyes.
    Sexytime... and then, not. What a disappointment. I like it better this way though. So dramatastic.
    September 17th, 2010 at 05:35am
  • die kleine Sonne

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    I love this so much! (:
    September 14th, 2010 at 07:39pm
  • robotsliek

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    HAVENT COMMENTED IN FOREVER D:
    sorry):

    anyyyyyyyyyyways
    that was soo awkward and cute and amazingly written (:
    September 14th, 2010 at 07:17pm
  • itsahit

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    “I’ll just call you when I’m in need of some loving, Gare,” Maddie said.
    “Why? Because you think I’m sexy?” Garrett wiggled his eyebrows.
    Maddie laughed, “And convenient,” she said, taking a bite of ice cream.
    Garrett rolled his eyes, “You just keep telling yourself that you don’t want me, I know the truth.”
    Ooh! I want this to happen. I think he's the best choice for Maddie, and if not, I'll take him. I'd take some Garrett loving anytime, any place.
    September 14th, 2010 at 04:39pm