At least she was able to surprise Ita-chan with how strong she became, at least in that one instant. I can't wait to see your sequel - I'm freaking out, I have tears in my eyes, I'm singing along to Sweeney Todd songs which SO fits the bloody massacre mood (I'm watching it on the computer as I read the chapter XD and type this)...yeah. I really wanna know what's going to happen next. I can't wait.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Curses. I really wanna know what happens now that you've done this. You know? I mean, now Hinamei seems as though she's going to be brave and strong and fight Itachi before he runs...but how much damage would little Hinamei do?! AAAAAAAAAGH! And I'm glad there's going to be a sequel.
I love how you made Ita-chan regretful, sort of, but the flashbacks were just that much sadder! BEST FRIENDS! UGGGGGGH. I knew it had to happen, but I wasn't ready to lose Shisui yet!!! I was like, in love with him and his cocky self. Like, really.
UGH.
I still love you and this story. But I don't hafta like y'all right now.
I though Shisui liked her, but I wasn't going to say anything. Now we KNOW that Shisui likes her, but Hinamei has finally come to terms with the fact that she likes Ita-chan...ha. Poor Shisui.
I love this story, you know? And I really can't wait to see where you're going next. Really.
Although the little argument at the end made me want to cry. Ita-chan DID of course admit he liked her, which was pretty awesome, but then he's like "I can't deal with you right now. Leave." Ugh. Boys.
And I feel all alooooooone as a commenter, but I love this story so much it's not even funny. I like the way you're developing the characters and the story, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here. :)
I love how this is going so far and I really, really liked this chapter. However, i cannot leave a super long comment like I would normally try to do because I have eight minutes to get ready for school because my bus comes then...haha. :)
I feel like a one-woman fan club... Okay, so Ita-chan really freaked me out at the end there...and I wonder what poor little Sasuke-kun thought...I bet Hinamei was freaked out, too...hmm... Well, I understand why it might take you a while to update...but I think I might be more hooked on this now than I had been before!!! :)
Ita-chan showed his evil side. But he also showed a cute side. GAAAAH! I still really love this story, though. You should know that. Until the next fantabulistic update! (random, made-up words FTW!!!)
Okay, so I almost cried. And is Ita-chan just making false promises? 'Cause that's mean and unfair to Hinamei. Anyhow, I love this story, y'know? Can't wait to see how the rest unfolds :)
OMG. Itachi really does like her - no, excuse me, he LOVES her! (Happy fangirl squealing moment ensues) Okay. I'm done. Yeah, so, I was giggling throughout. Until the whole crazy Kaa-san thing. That was kind of uber creepy and if I were Hinamei I'd run to Ita-chan XD lol. Anyway, love it so far! Can't wait to see what comes next!!! :)
Why do I feel like your only supporter sometimes, I wonder? Oh, I know! Maybe it's because over half of this page is mine!!! :) Love it still, can't wait to see how it all works out. I kind of want Hinamei to grow up and be like, good. As in, I'm all for the underdogs and I hope she's one of the best kunoichi they've got, you know? Aw, whatever. Can't wait to read more Ita-chan! (Heehee, that still makes me giggle...Ita-chan....)