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  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    EEEEEEEEEEP! Ita-chan worried me for a minute there, being all mean and brooding and whatnot. And then I think he got jealous when Shisui offered to help instead, so that's why he said he'd help Hinamei. And I like the picture! But unfortunately...I think Ita-chan has begun to get his cocky, evil side. Dun. Dun. Dunnn...I really don't want a mean Ita-chan. I've gotten used to the little one, haha.

    Anyway...are they gonna be five or however old the whole time, or are they going to grow older...? Haha, stupid question, but I'm starting to get excited; I'm thinking it might end up as long or longer than Gaara did :)

    Eagerly awaiting further Ita-chan writings :)
    November 7th, 2010 at 06:06pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Oh, yes, I see you have updated again. And strangely, I'm surprised they're all alive. Little Ita-chan was so brave back there, all to save Hinamei! Haha...I don't think I'll stop calling Itachi Ita-chan, because it's funny. :)

    Well, love, love, love love love lovelovelove this, and I am soooo glad you didn't leave me with the cliffhanger for very long, because I might have cried. Lol :)
    November 5th, 2010 at 12:58am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Why did you go there?! Now I'm wondering what's going to happen to Hinamei. Will Ita-chan be able to save her, or will Shisui help, or will she be kidnapped and not seen for years?!

    Well, whatever you do, I love this story and I can't wait for the update!
    November 4th, 2010 at 11:34pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Is she really going to give up on being a kunoichi?!

    Now you really need to update sooner, because I need to find out what happens next. When Shisui plans it, it can't be good. haha :)

    Until the next awesome update!
    October 26th, 2010 at 01:00am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    EEEEEEEEEEP!

    Adorable :)

    And NO, Hinamei's not as deep as he thought she was.
    She's deeper.

    Love it, can't wait for your next fantastic update!
    October 23rd, 2010 at 10:07pm
  • Hilltop Hi-Jinks

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    I really like this.
    Can't wait for more ^-^
    October 19th, 2010 at 12:43pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    An update!!!

    Itachi was being a jerk. Again. And I hate Chiyoko-sensei. (If I got the name right)...
    I wish Itachi didn't care so much about what all the other kids thought, and what everyone expects of him. If he didn't, it probably wouldn't all turn out like it does in the series. Meh.

    Oh, well. It'll work out some way for Hinamei. Maybe in death, but somehow something will work out.
    Until next time!!
    October 7th, 2010 at 03:23am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Of course he DOES.

    And yes, I can see you updated...I just haven't been able to be on long enough to read said updates. My honors classes are beginning to take their toll on me.

    Anyway, I love it still, and Itachi soooo does too like Hinamei like that! :) haha
    Until next fantastic update!
    September 25th, 2010 at 12:59am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Great update. Mean little Itachi-chan hurt Hinamei-kun, though!!! NOO!

    Oh, well. I still love this story, kind of addicted. ^_^ You should totally update soon! <3 XD
    September 1st, 2010 at 12:43pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Ooooh...love this story. Later update is okay, It's only been eleven days since I read the most recent chapter...I have a few stories I haven't updated since June XD

    So, can't wait for the next one, and this story will have a sequel?? YAY!!!
    August 30th, 2010 at 12:12am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    OMG I love it. You do fine with writing about a five year old - I do much worse when I try XD

    Love it, and I especially love Hinamei-kun/chan/san (lol).
    Until next time, then!
    August 18th, 2010 at 04:41pm
  • The Rev.

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    This is possibly the best Naruto story I've read on here :D
    There aren't many good ones, sadly.
    But, this is very original and very well written. I can promise you that you just scored a subscriber :D
    August 18th, 2010 at 11:27am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    "Kaa-san! I hate him!"

    Oooh, I bet her mother loved that one. ^_^
    Poor wittle Sasuke-kun, getting scared. Serves him right. XD
    Love, love, love it already. Can't wait for more!
    August 15th, 2010 at 06:59pm
  • Virgin America

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    i love your writings!! theyre just so inspiring and filled with emotion. Good job i subscribed
    August 14th, 2010 at 07:49pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Oooooh, you've already got me hooked. I mean, it doesn't seem like the type of story that could ever have a happy ending...but if you're writing it, it's totally worth reading. I can't wait!!!

    Update soon...? ^^
    August 14th, 2010 at 12:48am