Things Have Changed For Me... - Comments

Nice story update soon pls :)

hey i still love it nomatter how short... NOW WRITE MORE XD jk jk

love the update :D

yes just keep writing please like you said you ok?

love the update :D

love the update :D

love the update :D

love the update :D

love the update :D
and the new layout :D

1. Studying Mona Lisa? Gee I wonder why... ; )

-I like the new layout but the blue background is a little harsh in the eyes.

-I was reading earlier chapters, defiantly add some detail. More about characters like what their doing, face expression Just don't leave it with what they said. It's nice to have a visual with whats happening.

- Spell check is an amazing tool. I have a mac, so if you do have a proof read too or you could always have someone pre-read it and edit for you.

- Like we talked about in our messages, I can see how it can seem boring, but it's getting more interesting.

Aw man I hope you don't get super mad with me about all my comments. I'm just trying to help you. You have a good story, but even some of the best stories on here could use improvement. (Not that I'm one to talk, my story needs improvement too)
Well hopefully I didn't hurt your feelings or anything. I'm pretty sensitive with my writing. But if you want to leave a comment like I did to you, your more then welcome.

love the update :D

love the update :D

love this so far :D im subscribing :D

I like this, just one thing there's a part where it says 'things I couldn't do with my alto voice'. This should say soprano voice because alto is low, and soprano is high. Hope you update, and sorry for my vocal class uptightness!

aweeee :) update again hahaha

dude..this is gonna get awkward if i'm the only person commenting hahaha..but yes. i wanna know what happens so update!

haha awesome...i'm commenting again. but yeah. he should ask her out. :)

woo-hoo, first comment! keep updating :)