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  • ravenclaw820

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    Nice story update soon pls :)
    June 4th, 2011 at 08:23am
  • liberationtheory

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    hey i still love it nomatter how short... NOW WRITE MORE XD jk jk
    May 29th, 2011 at 09:03pm
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    love the update :D
    May 29th, 2011 at 01:02pm
  • liberationtheory

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    yes just keep writing please like you said you ok?
    May 29th, 2011 at 02:21am
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    love the update :D
    April 1st, 2011 at 07:39pm
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    love the update :D
    March 31st, 2011 at 11:10pm
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    love the update :D
    February 22nd, 2011 at 08:51am
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    love the update :D
    January 22nd, 2011 at 12:50pm
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    love the update :D
    and the new layout :D
    January 21st, 2011 at 09:06am
  • Be Wonderful

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    1. Studying Mona Lisa? Gee I wonder why... ; )

    -I like the new layout but the blue background is a little harsh in the eyes.

    -I was reading earlier chapters, defiantly add some detail. More about characters like what their doing, face expression Just don't leave it with what they said. It's nice to have a visual with whats happening.

    - Spell check is an amazing tool. I have a mac, so if you do have a proof read too or you could always have someone pre-read it and edit for you.

    - Like we talked about in our messages, I can see how it can seem boring, but it's getting more interesting.

    Aw man I hope you don't get super mad with me about all my comments. I'm just trying to help you. You have a good story, but even some of the best stories on here could use improvement. (Not that I'm one to talk, my story needs improvement too)
    Well hopefully I didn't hurt your feelings or anything. I'm pretty sensitive with my writing. But if you want to leave a comment like I did to you, your more then welcome.
    January 21st, 2011 at 02:44am
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    love the update :D
    January 5th, 2011 at 12:06pm
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    love the update :D
    September 23rd, 2010 at 08:47am
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    love this so far :D im subscribing :D
    August 21st, 2010 at 11:16pm
  • HighOnMisery

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    I like this, just one thing there's a part where it says 'things I couldn't do with my alto voice'. This should say soprano voice because alto is low, and soprano is high. Hope you update, and sorry for my vocal class uptightness!
    August 17th, 2010 at 07:16am
  • justSJ

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    aweeee :) update again hahaha
    August 17th, 2010 at 02:54am
  • justSJ

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    dude..this is gonna get awkward if i'm the only person commenting hahaha..but yes. i wanna know what happens so update!
    August 16th, 2010 at 11:57pm
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    haha awesome...i'm commenting again. but yeah. he should ask her out. :)
    August 14th, 2010 at 10:41pm
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    woo-hoo, first comment! keep updating :)
    August 14th, 2010 at 06:31am
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