To Die Unknown - Comments

Wow. I must tell you that this chapter was insane. You did a fantastic job. I could feel as if I was HAYLEY! god! you described her anger in such a good way that the computer screen almost sucked me in. Like... seriouslly you are so fucking good at this. You make me hate Brian's attitude he is a cocky downright bastard awwwrgh!
congrats for the BEST chapter so far

XOXO

Knife

Yessss you updated! All my other subscriptions were getting boring

I just read your amazing ZOMBIE story! Can't wait for the next update :) R.I.P James Owen Sullivan (February 9, 1981-December 28, 2009) You are foREVer in my heart.

I really love watching this story progress as well as our own! It's fitting that the last person she wants to see right now is the one person she is tied to. XD A wonderfully written, detailed chapter. I do hope that Victoria will be ok. And what of Matt, Johnny? More Soon. : )

Oh And victoria to!
Update soon! :D

Wow,
This chapter was suspencefull!
I wonder what kinda crazies have them and if zacky and jane are okay! D:

Aw, c'mon! Really, a cliffhanger. -.-
not cool.

UPDATE SOON!

YES! I got first comment on the fourth page. Which means this story probably just went up another star. Thanks to me again. Heheee *shurgs...again* that must deserve some sort of compensation. Maybe in the form of To Die Unkown? I dunno

The cliffhanger was great. But your cliffhangers, and me, we have this sort of love/hate relationship. SO why don't you make it better by updating? So we can love each other again?

God dammit. I can just like, picture these people, these crazy people like hiding in the grass, camo coloured paint on their faces and looking through their sniper rifle scopes. It's just amazing. Like this story. The detail was amazing in this chapter, with it's obvious ambiguity.

Ah damn cliff hangers.
Can't wait to find out what happens next
:)

Oh shit...
they just keep managing to get themselves into trouble, don't they?

Well hun you already know I absolutely adore this story and i'm sorry that I haven't been keeping up with it. I had way to much on my plate with school. But I loved what I missed and you still are able to keep me enticed through out the entire thing. I love how you ended chapter ten, such a cliff hanger xD

I just realised I have commented the story. Dur. I mean *Sorry I am just now commenting.*

Brian cried out and I opened my arms, the infected lay dead at his feet. He holding onto his arm, blood seeping between his fingers. “You shot me!”

“But I saved you.” I responded.

This made me laugh too. The way you write is just so amazing. Every detail and every emotion Hayley has is just so well written. One of the main things about stories on this site - I think - is that the main girl falls way too hard and way too fast for the main man. It's like the writer just wants to get the meeting of the couple over and just straight into the relationship, so they can just get the story over, you know?

Sorry I haven't commented the story yet, or even replied to your comment yet! Haha. But I've been away on holiday and haven't been able to access the compuuutor. So I can't tell if there has been four comments for this chapter or three but I certainly know that, that isn't enough for a story wih this much brilliance. Just remember, I love you and your story.

....And that should deserve an update. n_n

God, she is such a clumsy dork... I love her!!! Hahaha she shot Syn =D

I Liked chapter 9, although it was a bit short compared to the rest of the chapters you have written. I thik that it was very exciting but the characters were a bit... plain this time. I don't know what happened this time with that because you usually put so many emotions in their words. Again, Your style is so clean and perfect and the structure is awesome. I really can't wait for that update!!

This is amazing! (:
I love it!
Would you comment me when you update my email is out of order at the moment so i cant get my subs. ):
I love this thought! amazing! cant wait for more!

That was fast. :)
God, I fucking love this story.
It's like my drug!!
Oh, and when Jimmy calls about Johnny, you say 'I' instead of 'A'. Read over that part and you'll understand what I mean.
I wish that they took Victoria. I know that she'll be alright but both of the sisters will be worrying because they don't know for sure if the other is alive...
I can't wait till your next one. Merry X-Mas!

omg this story is awesome. i cant wait for the next one