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  • LOVE1516

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    Omg I started reading this last night and couldn't stop........ Not the ending I was expecting! I mean wow, just wow... You have a really neat way of writing!
    July 7th, 2013 at 05:33pm
  • mariashby

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    oh my god this is seriously one of the best stories I've ever read
    March 23rd, 2013 at 03:59pm
  • alexisxx13

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    I Loved it. I WIsh They Could've Been Toqether Alive Tho. & that Blake Somehow Got Better.
    But I Still Loved it <33
    January 28th, 2011 at 03:25am
  • OMGzgirl

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    Thank you guys :). I will edit this in the future to make it a little better.
    January 5th, 2011 at 10:57pm
  • TayFreak

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    its a good story, kinda freaked me out cause my nephews name is blake henderson lol and in the last chapter you wrote that his middle name was micheal... thats my nephews dads name
    January 5th, 2011 at 08:05am
  • itscomplicated.

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    i think i just cried a bit, god, i love this story.
    January 5th, 2011 at 08:04am
  • MirrorRain

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    The ending was pretty good. Sad, and yet happy. :)
    January 5th, 2011 at 01:51am
  • Burgerat20

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    i fucking loved it. Your amazing i love you
    January 5th, 2011 at 01:39am
  • Just_QueenPaige

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    thats a fucked true love nut hey true love is true love love it!!!!!
    January 5th, 2011 at 01:26am
  • kaintheclouds

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    Oh, how I wanted Blake and Val to be together, alive lol. But it was still a good story, sad but nice :)
    January 5th, 2011 at 01:26am
  • i guess you heard.

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    Soooooooooo, sorry, but I have been a silent reader! :o I loved it, but the end was oh-so dissapointing. I would have loved if he had returned her and ran, then in the sequel *hint,hint* something would have happened (: . I still loved it though, & you now have a fan!

    - Noni.
    January 5th, 2011 at 01:22am
  • CrouchingTurte

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    I expected something similar. I knew they were both going to die, but I thought Blake was going to drive the car off the road. I loved it, though it seemed a bit rushed...
    <3 <3 <3
    January 5th, 2011 at 01:17am
  • baby-cakes

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    surprisingly i liked the ending [:

    Val going all depressed because of Blake i expected;
    but him killing himself? not so much.. sorry if i ruined
    it for some people with his comment: but still read it !
    & Reading This Story Is Worth It Nonetheless c: <3
    January 5th, 2011 at 01:12am
  • Snowfall Melody

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    Wow . . . that's insane
    January 5th, 2011 at 01:07am
  • Snowfall Melody

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    awwwww! :(
    January 5th, 2011 at 12:34am
  • Burgerat20

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    KEEP GOING!!
    January 2nd, 2011 at 08:21pm
  • kaintheclouds

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    Good story,*must read more*!!!!
    January 2nd, 2011 at 05:17am
  • Shadowsgirl

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    wow
    this story got a whole new twist...but I love it!!!
    i WOULD OF NEVER IMAGINE it THAT Archer is his brother!!!
    please update:)
    January 1st, 2011 at 11:45pm
  • alyssaaaxo5

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    his story is getting isanely intense... i can't believe blake would do that. -_-
    January 1st, 2011 at 08:06pm
  • Allison-

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    Great story.. Maybe a finale coming along?
    January 1st, 2011 at 04:46am