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Why do i get the feeling he snuck out?

aawww, poor Val

Erm......one, this story needs help also.
and two, the title could be He's Mental, That's his Problem. or He's Mental; That's his Problem.
It fails at where it's at, js. (:
You might want to re-do this story.

I loved that update! This story is undoubtably one of my favorite stories here on mibba! Update soon please!!!!

Wow, scary :) Can't wait for more

Last update was great! MORE MORE MOREEEE!!

Eh hem. MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE SOON! OR I'LL HAVE EDWARD CULLEN COME AND HUNT YOU DOWN!!!

Wow, that was pretty crazy! More soon!

great story so far!!! Update soon! But I sudgest you change the font color. It's hard to read because the layout is all black.

Awww, wow. :( THat was so sad

Wow, I love this story, very very interesting. I can't wait to continue reading

Wow, really different story, but it's good:D
Keep going,

good!