Plague's Slave - Comments

This is awesome.

Omg I love this story please write more!!! Cant wait!!!

OMG I LOVED THIS. I CAN'T BELIEVED WAT HAPPENED AND OMG BRIAN IS DEAD. ILOVEBRIAN :(
CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!

Ths was absolutely amazing....I would be sad that Bri died if he hadn't been such a fucking creep!!!! I like how you left ZV as still kinda mysterious, an enigma. And Johnny...ick! Jimmy's sweet, in a totally weird kind of way. And honestly, I got goose bumps when she went into the last room. That was so....terrifying!!!!!!

Loved this! Ready for the next!

pretty impressive slightly disappointed prefer the feel of the prequel. well done

Noooooooo Bri dies damn it..... Well I like the way her first time went down it was so romantic. Matt is still awesome, zacky is weird and Johnny is a necrophilia ewwww ^_^ I love it:)

omg this story is more put together than all the stories i read you really should publish these you would deff make abajillion off of these its effin mazing

worst cliffhanger ever.........
i want more.

Holy shit dude that's intense. Is he like seriously dead though? Or is he still alive?
Update soon you can't just end it there!

oh my god. that was fucking intense shit dude! and ha! i knew brian would die. stupid fucking bastard (in the story). can't wait for the sequel :D

omg you HAVE TO update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't leave us hangin' there!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow that chapter was amazing..what is Jimmy going to do to her??
Brian really died then??

oh my godness... :O
is Brian dead?!?!?!
You need to update like now... pretty please with sugar on top hahha!!
<3

Holy shit.... BRIAN!!!
I cried when he died, idk why but I just teared up.
And HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!?
A cliffhanger... really? *cries*

Other then that, I love how you describe all the shit Sophia is going through and thinking.
It makes things real cause we get a sense of what's going on with her as if we were in her head.
:)

O.O I was not exoecting Brian to go crazy. The chapter was amazing.

omg thats so intense haha cant wait for the nxt update :)

O.o how could you do that!you are evil for the cliff hanger

Oh my Jimmy.... This chapter has abducted my brain like a fucking evil alien. I am actually scared! I just stood up and turned the lights on.
Wah! I don't know what to think! Im so fucking impressed. I juts... can't ... TALK! Okay gimme a sec till i clear my mind. **Clears her mind**
Dude... I can't believe it. I'm actually crying... Gates is... Dead, and I don't know what to think about all of this...I can't believe how much power your writing has on my mind. It is so, weird.
**Sighs**
Well, I must tell you that I loved every secoond of it. This story has been so amazing. It has a lot of feelings hidden inside of it for us readers.
I guess that I have to thank you again for giving me such a great time everytime you update and i go in here and read. It is like a relief-path for me. You don't know how much it means to me....
I am so scared about what will happen! What will Jimmy do? He killed his best friend! Does he loves her that much? I NEED to fucking know what is going on. I guess I could infer, but right now im in shock, I'm like frozen and trapped inside the last paragraph of this last chapter ...

XOXO

Knife

HOLY SHIT.
WHAT THE FUCK?
WHAT THE FUCK?
okay. caps lock time over.
I'm so excited for the sequel.
But just seeing from the title,
and the ending of this chapter,
it seems like Jimmy's gonna abuse her. :/

D:
I was litterly staring at my computer screen with my mouth wide open the whole chapter!
he killed Syn!!! and Juimmy why are you still looking mad!!!!!