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  • thedevilsnightmare

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    That. Was. Amazing.
    I can't believe you killed Brian! That's your man! haha.
    Ya know, this is honestly, no bullshit, in my top three stories on this site and I'm not a big Jimmy fan, romantic wise. So that says a lot.
    I'm really excited for the next one:)
    They really should make a mini series at least for this haha
    September 19th, 2010 at 05:27am
  • Perfect Exceeder

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    UPDATE NOW(:
    'foree i esplode.
    September 16th, 2010 at 12:51am
  • Effing Perfect.

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    NO! DON'T LET HER BE THE ONE THAT DIES, OKAY, SHE CAN BE IN TROUBLE BUT NOOOOOOOOOOOO DYING! Just tell Jimmy, she thought that she was going to die, and couldn't do it not knowing, UGHHHH!! update soon, I love this story(;
    September 15th, 2010 at 01:40am
  • Don'tTryToFixMe

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    i love this story(:
    September 12th, 2010 at 07:18pm
  • natalie_loves_you

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    update pleaseeee. :)
    September 11th, 2010 at 06:07am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Oh holy hell this isn't going to end well is it?
    Please update soon?
    September 10th, 2010 at 04:14am
  • thedevilsnightmare

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    Oh, and of course Michelle is dead in your story haha. Only you.
    September 10th, 2010 at 03:42am
  • thedevilsnightmare

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    Oh my fucking God! This chapter was perfect, the way you wrote things and put her emotions in there. I felt like I was her!! Like for real!
    I'm like can't close my mouth right now! You're a bitch if you make me wait to long for another chapter lol.

    But we covered that NOONE reads that summary shit babe haha.
    September 10th, 2010 at 03:42am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Oh no Brian is going to do something to her now that she know what happened to Michelle.
    Amazing update :)
    September 10th, 2010 at 03:40am
  • ikickshins

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    I bet Brian wants to get revenge. ><
    September 10th, 2010 at 02:53am
  • KnifeMistress

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    Woah.. I don't know what to say right now. This is the most shocking cliffhanger I have ever read in my entire life, for real, not even in an actual book. This was brilliant. I'm so shocked I really can't explain what I feel at the moment. Damn, I loved the way you described her emotions wehen she was sitting at the porch, because I was doing the same! I was sitting outside my house, the sky is grey, it just stopped raining... wow... It made me cry, for real. I feel so identifyed with Sophia for some stuff that has been going on lately that makes me feel so bad and makes me want to run awa but I feel desperate whan I realize that there is no way out. But anyways, that does not matter....
    If I was Sophia I wouldn't be afraid of death anymore, she was more than prepared for that, I think I would be scared of the way Brian would kill me. That would give me something to cry about... for real. He is the most insane person ever. But now, What is jimmy going to do? Is he going to choose his best freind? or is he going to choose the person he loves? Thinking of it that way, all the weight of the situation lays down on Jimmy. I would not know what to do. My mid is like... BLANK! I don't know what to think. How will she escape from Gates? Is she even going to try to escape? Pffft so many questions...
    Well, Least but not last, I would like to thank you onece again for keep writing, because your story makes my mind fly and run away from reality, what you have written takes me so far away, Even if it is for a little while. Thank you for giving me at lest 10 minutes a week to forget about the shit I'm going through. I will never know how to thank you for all you have done. You are kind of a little heroine for me. It sounds so cursie, but it is so true.
    Once again... Thanks.

    With all my love.

    KnifeMistress
    September 10th, 2010 at 02:07am
  • thnxfrthvnm

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    um, what i didnt like about this chapter is that..... dun dun dun......... YOU LEFT IT WITH BRIAN ENTERING THE ROOM!
    and i was kind of confused with the whole "letters on the wall" thing.
    like, i get that each of them is for the guys, but like what do they all mean?
    there was a C for Christ, and a B for Buyers, even a G for Gates?... but what about the other letters?

    other then that, i like how jimmy loves her yet keeps it under thick blankets.
    its kind of cute, and reminds me of some kind of romeo and juliet kind of love, if that makes any sense.
    September 10th, 2010 at 12:35am
  • QueenProgrammer

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    HOLY SHIZ! SHE CANT DIE! NO!!! NOOO!!! Wahhh!! :(. UPDATE!!!
    September 10th, 2010 at 12:14am
  • Zacky's Beotch

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    OMIGOD OMIGOD OMIFUCKINGJESUSPENIS! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHAH! dear Lord don't let sophia die! i hope it's brian, please kill brian, not sophia! NOOOOOO!
    September 9th, 2010 at 10:39pm
  • who.could.guess

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    noooo i knew SOMEONE was going to die but not her!!
    September 9th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • Issues

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    O.O I hope she doesn't die, that would be horrable!!
    I loved the chapter.
    Please update soon.
    September 9th, 2010 at 10:01pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    oh noes!!!!
    shes so dead!
    September 9th, 2010 at 09:59pm
  • JessCat

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    ...waiting for an update...haha this story is really really good!!! :)
    September 8th, 2010 at 02:02pm
  • chelz2012

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    Fucking brian! agh i hope Jimmy rips his fucking dick off :) love it
    September 7th, 2010 at 03:26am
  • XtremeFairy

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    she really should tell jimmy what is going on and what brian is doing to her..woah someone going to die?!?! Great update
    September 5th, 2010 at 10:39pm
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