Ths was absolutely amazing....I would be sad that Bri died if he hadn't been such a fucking creep!!!! I like how you left ZV as still kinda mysterious, an enigma. And Johnny...ick! Jimmy's sweet, in a totally weird kind of way. And honestly, I got goose bumps when she went into the last room. That was so....terrifying!!!!!!
Noooooooo Bri dies damn it..... Well I like the way her first time went down it was so romantic. Matt is still awesome, zacky is weird and Johnny is a necrophilia ewwww ^_^ I love it:)
omg this story is more put together than all the stories i read you really should publish these you would deff make abajillion off of these its effin mazing
Holy shit.... BRIAN!!! I cried when he died, idk why but I just teared up. And HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!? A cliffhanger... really? *cries*
Other then that, I love how you describe all the shit Sophia is going through and thinking. It makes things real cause we get a sense of what's going on with her as if we were in her head. :)
Oh my Jimmy.... This chapter has abducted my brain like a fucking evil alien. I am actually scared! I just stood up and turned the lights on. Wah! I don't know what to think! Im so fucking impressed. I juts... can't ... TALK! Okay gimme a sec till i clear my mind. **Clears her mind** Dude... I can't believe it. I'm actually crying... Gates is... Dead, and I don't know what to think about all of this...I can't believe how much power your writing has on my mind. It is so, weird. **Sighs** Well, I must tell you that I loved every secoond of it. This story has been so amazing. It has a lot of feelings hidden inside of it for us readers. I guess that I have to thank you again for giving me such a great time everytime you update and i go in here and read. It is like a relief-path for me. You don't know how much it means to me.... I am so scared about what will happen! What will Jimmy do? He killed his best friend! Does he loves her that much? I NEED to fucking know what is going on. I guess I could infer, but right now im in shock, I'm like frozen and trapped inside the last paragraph of this last chapter ...
HOLY SHIT. WHAT THE FUCK? WHAT THE FUCK? okay. caps lock time over. I'm so excited for the sequel. But just seeing from the title, and the ending of this chapter, it seems like Jimmy's gonna abuse her. :/
D: I was litterly staring at my computer screen with my mouth wide open the whole chapter! he killed Syn!!! and Juimmy why are you still looking mad!!!!!