Truth or Dare? - Comments

keep updating this story i love it

this is super good i havnt finished yet but i like it ALOT!!!!

i just thought i'd tell you that you should space out your paragraphs and between different characters speech. for example:
"im hit, im going down" Justin dropped his gun a said "im empty" I handed him 1 of my guns as chaz ran away leaving butler I smirked an stopped squirting him an me an Justin waking towards him he slouched to the floor smiling an covering his head preparing for the blast
"bieber after chaz" he nodded an ran after chaz I grabbed butlers hands an uncovered his face an pushed him on the floor an straddled his waist "now , what gave you the idea you could beat me"
"we didn’t think you would team up with bieber an YOUR A GIRL YOUR SUPPOSED TO BE WIMPY"
also, you should fix your grammar. :))

I think it was good mabe space out the paragraph's more and I really like update soon!

I LOVE THIS! ^^^ I find it easy to read...? Please update soon! I'm subscribed.!

too hard to read.

its really good

It's good, but damn, it is a bit hard to read. Space the paragraphs more, I got tired of straning my eyes after the second chapter. "/

when are you gonna write more chapters?

i thot it was perfectly fine to read and i lurv it <3

Too hard to read.