Bedtime - Comments

Oh my God that was so good. I'm so sad she doesn't understand the difference between rape and... intercourse. I'm glad she's not gonna just bounce back like a lot of rape stories. it makes it a lot more realistic. Can't wait to read the sequel

Okay!! So I just found this story (I search Mibba for completed stories lol) and I read the entire story in two and a half hours! I was like "what is going to happen!?" and I usuall comment between each chapter but I couldn't wait to read it! But anyways Farrah is so adorable! And Blake is just so hopelessly in love with her it's crazy. Oh and that mace kid the one who's nuckin' futs, yeah wtf was up with that?! I seriously have to go to the bathroom right now because he scared the Jesus outta me!! I hope he dies I know that's horrible but he needs to die after what he did to Farrah!! And I'm really excited to read the sequel to this :D

---I loved it a lot and subscribed so I could read it later :P <3

I read the whole thing and thought I like the originaltiy...thank you fopr not letting her bounce back from rape so easily..

this is so good! i'm only on chapter five, but i love it! i love your writing style. C=

I just finished the whole thing and I'm in love with it... By far my favorite original fiction:D

I was wondering all the bedtime stories did you write them? and if so nicely done:)

I love the poem ^_^
Did you also write that....?

Anyways your an awesome writer.. I'm going for the sequel now:)

love the storyy

WOAH. looks like i've missed quite a few chapters. thanks for not sending me notifications, mibba :')
looking forward to catching up with this story <3

So I've been reading your story. The plot is simple but it has so much depth. All I ask is that you proofread each of your chapters if you can ever place a time. You have talent, lady, don't let it be overshadowed by small grammatical or spelling mistakes.

I just wanted to comment to say this story was amazing :D

I literally cried. That was the sweetest ending to the saddest story ever :') bravo

That was really good. I'll be reading the sequel too, positive.

Ahh! That was a good ending! I'm going to go read the summary for the sequel... XD

This was a really amazing story :) Well done for that hehe
On to the sequal

aaawww the ending was sssoo sweet :D

And we've come to the end of a beautiful while. :')
I'm excited for the sequel, and I'm rather curious to see what you do with it. :3

OH MY GOD! That was a beautiful ending! I'm so excited for the sequel now!

awwwwwwwwwww love the ending :D

I really loved this story.
It had every element I expected from it and more.
Childlike innocence, harsh realities, realism, and hope.
Not a lot of people are good with writing stories with those elements, but you did a wonderful job.
I can't wait for the sequel. I just know it will be great. n_n

OH. MY. GOSH. I can't even...there aren't word to...it's just..OH. MY. GOSH. This is way beyong good, or great, or awesome, or...there are just no words!
WOW.

AHHH!!! I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! I READ IT IN TWO HOURS! Haha. I absolutely adored this story and I love your writing. It's so much like poetry and I love reading it. It's like a breath of fresh air. I'm so excited for the sequel. :)