stumbled on this little gem you've got here and have read my way through everything posted. It's one of the most unique a7x stories I've ever read and I'd gladly read it through the end. I'll be checking for updates but for now I'll make my way to your other stories. :) have a nice day!
I adore this story. However, when Genivee is talking to her mother (rebelling, really) they're supposed to be talking in French. I think the first couple of sentences are, but afterwards it changes to Spanish. I can't remember which chapter it is, but it's fairly early on in the story
I love it, love it, love it! I've grown up with the movie Chocolat and my mom is Native American, Spanish, and French. She was also a fabulous baker so I love the details of her love and intuition for baking. Truly one of the best stories on this site, I love the modern twist that you put on Chocolat! . I hope you find some inspiration and are able to update soon. I immediately subscribed the second I finished reading. Just, wow. Très magnifique!
woah. barely no comments on this amazing story?! o_o thanks to writers to you I'm beginning to be read love stories... IDK, I hated them before, but that just means you're amazing writer :] keep going!
If I change my name to Nemo will you update this more? I love this story, it's different, interesting, funny and well awesomeness all around. I don't get why this hasn't gotten more comments but eff that - this is great stuff! <3
Yay!!! I really like this story and I'm happy you updated! I did not expect Michelle walking in on them making out. I can't wait to see what Michelle tells Genivee if she gets to talk to her. Can't wait for more!!!
I love this story. I also love the fact that the girl in the banner is Radeo Suicide, I love her ! But seriously, I love reading this so update soon (: x
I absolutely love your writing! You have a certain rhythm and style that I rather enjoyed. I love the effort you put in the meticulous detail and description, both visually or emotionally. It's different from any other avenged fanfics. You seem to make the people like real people rather than the musicians they are known as to the world. They all have their faults and trials and tribulations. Also, I like the fact that you didn't rat out or make out the wives as bitches. It infuriates me when people do that.