Ah, that's such a thoughtful and romantic date idea. Brian must be beyond interested in Genivee if he's put so much thought into that date. I love that each of Genivee's tattoo's have such a intriguing story behind them.
I can't believe that I missed so much!!! Brian really likes her and I hope she stays. You have an art to writing and I really like the way you write. Hope you update soon because I can't wait to see how the rest of their date goes!
I love the way you write. When reading it, you can immediately notice the time and effort you put into your writing. It shows with the way you use your words, the spelling, and the grammar. I'm happy that Gena and Leana aren't shunning Genivee for going on a date with Brian. Great update. :]
I honestly have no idea why this story has not recieved more comments.It's so different from anything else I've ever read on here.The story is beautifully written, with exquisite attention to detail and description. The names you've chosen for your characters are uniquely beautiful. Genivee is a a very unique person. It's interesting reading about how she handles life and the hardships of it. I appreciate that she has such a strong love and respect for her family.
Haha I hope Zacky doesn't tell Matt >_< The second update today is greatly appreciated. If it weren't for you I would be running around like a crazy person for a lack of something to do. :)
seven: Cute outfits that you gave her. Wondering what's going to happen next? Great descriptions as well. Well, until this gets UPDATED, I'm going to go and read/comment to some of your other stories so Ciao until later.
six: 50+ you say; well, then count on me to be there for every single chapter. Wondering what's going to happen when they get to the bakery? Will Leana still be there? Can't wait to read the next chapter to a story that has awesomely addicted descriptions.
five: So will Gena be her newest student? Or will she shut her down like she kindly did to Brian? What's Zacky going to say when he meets her? Can't wait to read what happens during her night out.
four: I'm now wondering how long until she gets her newest student? Another great chapter with even more great descriptions. I love being addicted to this story. Wondering what's going to happen the next day? What'she and Zacky conversation going to be like?
two: This is really cute and with great descriptions. Wondering what's she going to guess his favorite is next time? Wondering how long until she realizes he was joking? Subscribing and putting this on REOS (read 'em or suffer; it's a journal story thing I'm doing, trying to get more stories that don't have many comments noticed). Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Sounds interesting and great descriptions. Wondering what the name of the bakery means though. What extra baggage? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Great update!!! Gena is already suspicious... I can't wait for Zacky and Gena to meet Genivee. I also can't wait to see if Gena is going to be Genivee's apprentice. Update soon!!!!
This story is AMAZING!!! I really love the concept of it. I read all the chapters in one sitting and I'm hooked. Can't wait for more of this story I know it's only going to keep getting better!!!