'Til Morning - Comments

This story was simply amazing. When I read the second chapter, I was really worried that he was a lunatic. You caught me by surprise that he was actually flying. It's an absolutely enchanting story!

Oh my god! This was absolutely beautiful! I am such a huge fan of Peter Pan, and this story...wow! I loved the modern twist to it, and his back story just broke my heart, and damn! I loved this a lot! You are a great writer and I just love the layout =]

Oh my gosh, I am a huge Peter Pan fan and when I saw this story it captured my interest instantly and I got to say this was one of the best stories I have read, I love what you have done. From the first line i was captivated it started great and ended just as good. I love, Love, LOVE this story. Brilliant.
Thank you for writing this. it was great :)

This actually stunned me - I love it!

Wow, this was really amazing! It was long enough to captivate me, but short enough to not feel drawn out. I really loved it!

You know its a great story when the reader loves the ending but still wants more.

That was such a weird ending, and yet, somehow, I loved it. Wonderful job, I love Peter Pan and this was fantastic to read! I want more! I really love this, great, wonderful, brilliant job :)

Wow my capacity for words of praise is really astounding, isn't it?

this is wonderful

This just proves the point that imagination can be real, and isn't just simply imagination. :')
This was very touching. I loved it.
Amazing work. :)

I'd love to rant about how amazing and beautiful this is. How you captured everything so well and how all the things flowed together to nicely. But I'd like to say one thing: you did Peter Pan justice :) Wonderful story!

This is beautiful. I simply love this. :)) Recommended.

Peter Pan is one of my favorites and I think you wrote this brilliantly. The writing flowed so well and everything just seemed to click. I loved how you described Peter and I really liked Lindy. This whole thing was wonderful. You did a great job. And surprisingly I actually liked the ending. Though, this would make a very interesting full length story.

Loved it. Great job.
:)

Holy CRAP, this was AMAZING. First of all, I love Peter Pan, so thats a given. And second, I just love how you did this! I wanted more, haha. You ended it in a perfect way, but this was great. I love that you tied in a mental instability to the actual story of Peter Pan and wrote this.

Great job! :)

Oh! Please, continue! I know it was for a contest and all, but this is so good. I want to hear more, so, so much more. Oh, pretty please with a cherry on top?!?

haha i luv it!

Wow, I wish I got comments like the above. xD

Anyway, I would like to say that I liked, no, LOVED your story. It's amazing, but it only lacks one thing...a Captain Hook character!

Just kidding it lacks nothing.=] But this story is really intriguing, and I liked it's simplicity.

This is good. Don't stop writing, oh please oh please oh please!

beyond cute. made me coo so much. i love linda for sticking up to the bullies. i used to do that for a kid in my class and it made me connect to her a bit. and i am reallllllly happy peter barry got what he wanted in the end and is ok(:

i find this layout really really pretty :D
It's not overwhelming and very nice to look at :)
it's nice that this new guy seems to be a happy guy
but i get why the girl is wondering about him
i like how the main character just like walks around and takes food x)
she just seems like a fun character that I think I'm going to grow to love :D
Peter seems like a very life-loving, he seems to be always happy :)
i like how you introduced her name by her meeting him, that's nice :)
oh jeez he's like a clingy guy :/ i bet she doesn't like that!
ahh tis is getting realy good :) love it so far!

poor Peter :( his dad left and his mother commited suicide
it's weird how he can be so optomistic when something like thath apened to him
but rather that than being super depressed and miserable all the time
oh, he has physcosis, that would explain a lot
that is really sad why his brain works like that, because of his mother
I still am really, really liking this so far :D

well now we know why he hangs out with the disabled kids
but he's just so happy :) I really do like Peter
and it's nice that Lindy is now sticking up for him :)
Peter is missing D: oh no! not good at all!
a month? my gosh. maybe he think he "went to Neverland"?
I don't know, but i hope he is safe and comes back soon!
ahh he is flying :D Peter really is Peter Pan,
he wasn't lying, he has no disorder, he's living a real life :)
and i love hwo you ended it.
and i finally got teh connection with Lindy - cindy thing there :)
this was truly straight up fantastic. Great modern spin on this
just AMAZING <3

I would have commented ASAP after read chapter 3, but I got the 'brb' thing when I click on the comment thing. =[

But this is really good writing here. Kudos on the research. =D And I liked the twist at the end. =D