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  • AlexandraGates

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    Hey. Here's my comment. (:

    WhatWentWell: It's different from most of the things on here.
    EvenBetterIf: You could cut down on the dialogue. There should really be more description than speech so it doesn't become a script. (:
    December 26th, 2010 at 12:05am
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