My Blood on Your Lips, Your Money in My Bra - Comments

I.......I honestly don't know what to say. I read this story the whole way through in about two days and I swear you should, if it hasn't already been, published. I'm not joking. It's amazing. You describe everything so wonderfully and it's not all fancy pantsy and annoying like I thought Twilight was and like many vampire/werewolf/other mystical beings stories now are. The characters are believable and the emotions are real. I loved the ending but I'm certainly glad you wrote a sequel. I'm upset that you killed Elyria off as she was a wonderful character and I was hoping for some sort of loophole for her to live right until the end but I guess it just wasn't meant to be. I just really want Eli and Kyrianna, both of whom I also adore, to have a happy ending of some sort or maybe just some closure. This story truly broke my heart! I swear, I'm going to miss Elyria so much but I can't wait to read the continuation of everyone else's, especially Eli and Kyrianna's, stories.

WHAT!? I refuse to believe it's done! Please, it can't be done! Not yet! SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please

i really think u should write a sequel. plez u r one of the few good stories i read that update regularly during the school year. so i beg u plez!!!!

i love ur story!!!!!!!!!! please please please please please please please please write a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh! Your ending it here!? That is sad :( cuz u never find out what happen to everyone!
U should really write a sequel. Please!? And I don't think it's a good ending for Elyria because she had no clue that's what would happen to her if she drank his blood. And for the other to a really sad ending for them.

This story is so unique (along with every other one you've written) and I'm sad to see it's over. I really do hope you continue with this story, for it such a sad ending.

I think the ending suited Elyria well. She gave her body to monsters, so she had to pay by returning the favor, by becoming a monster herself. I want a sequel, I think there's loads of options for one, and leaving it hanging like that is cruel.

WOW. What an ending...
I actually think it suits Elyria... She didn't really think her situation through...
WOW. I kinda feel bad for Eli and Kyrriana... But why, maybe they'll turn out to be better off...?
Yeah, doubt it. I loved Elyria.
I think a sequel suits this story... The end really leave you wanting more. Besides, if you want a sequel, you should write a sequel.

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Please?

I volunteer to be her guardian angel!!!!
Basically, she's not allowed to die. ;)
I thought I'd commented on this back when I first started reading, but I suppose I didn't. Well, you know of my bad commenting habits.
I like Kyrianna, to be honest. She's pretty awesome! But probably what I like better about her part in the story is Elyria's emotional confusion towards the girl >.<
Eli is just pretty awesome. I like him. Though I was made when he killed... Derrick. I think it was Derrick, that was a while ago, and I'm bad at remembering names. I'm sure you know who I'm talking about.
Um... Yeah. More soon? :)

I don't think it's too sudden. I think it fits right in. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

oooooooooohh... I wonder what happens next? UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

Even I'm not sure about who I'd choose, had I been in her place. Hmmm... Kyrianna or Eli? I don't know. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

Wow. Terrance is dead. It feels weird, I find. It's quite freeing, though. I'm sad Gabriel had to go, he was a cool kid. Can she be with Eli now? Please? UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

I love this story! It's positively awesome! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

I love your book I couldn't wait to read it so I went to your other site I love it

Oh. My. God. This story is absolutely amazing and I haven't even gotten past the sixth chapter yet...
I love it!! I also like how you describe things, the vampiric side of them. :)

I love this story and can't wait toread more Thank You for updating often

I love this!

Were u on quizilla?!