Homicide - Comments

Xyliaa (100)

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Thanks. We are working on it. Just a few kinks to work out here and there. Thanks for the input though, greatly appreciated. Keep reading and subscribe. Thanks a billion!

October 26th, 2010 at 04:39am

Mikey James Way (100)

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This was awesome.
You write really really well.
But I think you need to press enter twice when starting a new paragraph. It was hard for me to read. =/
but yeah, other than that... GO THE CHIMERA!

October 22nd, 2010 at 06:15am

Xyliaa (100)

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Thank you so much! This it both of ours first co-write and I'm glad we got feed back already! Tell your friends about us.

August 31st, 2010 at 12:31am

Queen_Of_The_Damned (100)

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Ahh! I love!
This really sounds interesting.
I absolutely love the details and Edwards thoughts...

I'll subscribe and will be waiting for the next chapter :)

August 25th, 2010 at 06:41am