OH my god! Jimmy ate It I dont believe it!!! hahaha sadly I can see him doing something like that. and I love the St. Elmo's fire reference. I may be wrong but haha oh wells. please continue
well at least she's getting her memory back, very slowly. She's probably in experiencing alot of inner turmoil right now. Let's hope she figures somethings out. Great update!
I just found your story today. You have some serious talent when it comes to writing. I just now subscribed and i'll be looking forward to the next update. Awesome job =)
Em, your writing talents wow me. I cannot believe you can write this. I'm crying reading this and you did it just giving enough emotion for him. I cannot wait for me.
Melinda ....what she thought was the worst laugh you will ever hear. She’s had several attempts to change it but it never worked so she decided to stick with her normal laugh. It never bothered me because I had been used to it for so long but I guess she never liked it.
I have a friend who is exactly the same way, word for word. Kinda funny. XD This is a good story and pretty deep. You're very good at writing things of an emotional nature. Keep up the good writing!