False Pretense - Comments

I would have killed my father if he did that.
and if he left every year around that time he would most defiantly be dead.

I still love the story and I'm happy that she has both Jai and Zacky there for her

Can't wait to read more :)

damn fucked up father

damn.
this was so intense.
i like it a lot.
her dad is a fucking douche that's all i have to say about him.

:( sad chapter
I can't believe her dad though and also I hope Zacky can get through to her
Update soon please
<3 Michele

Wow! Her dad is such a doucher.
He should just go jump off a bridge.
Poor Cas.
Update soon. =]

Shit...that's a tough truth to face. And her Dad is such an asshole!! What kind of father just gives up on his family? Man up - you made fucking vows infront of a room full of people, the law - and in some cases - the big guy upstairs. What the fuck, man? Life's hard but you don't go round ruining your daughter's life.
Anyway - excuse the rant. Really great updates; they really helped explain the whole drinking / mourning thing for Cas. And the Daddy revelations are :O making.
More soon? Please?

great update i love the story.!.

wow cas's dad is an ass!
you think he would at least rty to be there for her!

NOT EVEN SHANE WEST CAN COMPARE TO THE AMAZING LOVE I HAVE FOR MY BESS FRANN and your sexiness! LMAO Loved the update Georgey...!!!!!!!
COWABUNGA!

This is even better than Derek MEOW...you even said so yourself...the only thing better than this story and your sexiness is Shane West...my future husband, aka your future brother in law...I LOVE YOU BESS FRAN!!! UPDATE THIS BITCH SOOON!

REALLY GREAT UPDATESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!

New reader alert ;]
I started this story a couple days ago, and I shall not lie, it's great to read.
I like that Jai showed up...and I wouldn't mind keeping that shirt myself! ;D

I love this.
She's gonna have quite the hangover after all of this is over.
Can't wait for more.

Awe I love that her best friend showed up
I can't wait for more
Update soon
<3 Michele

Wow! I agree with mistery.
I hope she doesn't do something she'll regret. xp

I love this story...please update =)

Aww I feel sorry for Cas.... I know how she feels. Good update and can't wait for more.

woah just read it all! i love it!
i hope she doesnt do anything she regrets while trashed!!!

i want to hear more

Oh Jimmy.
Love this.